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tonyabirds

March 12, 2023

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Movie review "Winter on fire"

For me, this movie is not typical and not just next in my line "want to see next". 9 years ago I lived in Ukraine, of course, I was younger I couldn't understand how the problem was big and how this doing will change my life and my country's life.
"Winter on fire" is a documentary movie. The picture shows how powerful Ukranian people can be and how important for them to follow their fundamentals. It was a big fight between the government (under the influence of russia) and the people. The second one tried to defend their rights to freedom of speech and voice. After several months people fight and finally they won. This victory cost them a hundred lives, and wounds. This is a big price for freedom which you should have had anyway. The government has gone and for 8 years Ukrainians leave their life in the way they want. But then came russia and still now try destroyed Ukraine. But it will be another story.

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Movie review "Winter on fFire"

Make sure to capitalize the main words in the title of the movie!

For me, this movie is not typical and not just next ion my line "want to see next" list.

In English we usually refer to the movies or shows we want to watch next as a "list", not "line"

9 years ago I lived in Ukraine, o. Of course, I was younger and I couldn't understand how big the problem was big and how this doing willould change my life and my country's life.

"Winter on fFire" is a documentary movie.

The picture shows how powerful the Ukrainian people can be and how important it is for them to follow their fundamentals.

ItThere was a big fight between the government (under the influence of rRussia) and the people.

To make this sentence clearer, you could say "the people of Ukraine" instead of only "the people".

The second one tried to defend their rights to freedom of speech and voice.

After several months people fiought and finally they won.

I might reword this sentence as: "The people fought for several months, then finally they won."

This victory cost them a hundred lives, and wounds.

Saying "and wounds" at the end disrupts the flow of this sentence. Instead I might say something like "This victory cost them a hundred lives and caused many wounds."

This is a big price for freedom which youthe people of Ukraine should have had anyway.

Your sentence was correct but it was a little unclear who "you" was referring to. I think adding a specific group of people makes it more clear!

The government has gone and for 8 years Ukrainians leahave lived their life in the way they want.

But then came russia and still now tryRussia came and tried to destroyed Ukraine.

But ithat will be another story.

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This movie sounds really interesting. Nice job!

Movie review "Winter on fire"

For me, this movie is not typical and not just next in my line "want to see next".

9 years ago I lived in Ukraine, of course, I was younger I couldn't understand how the problem was big and how this doing will change my life and my country's life.

"Winter on fire" is a documentary movie.

The picture shows how powerful Ukrainian people can be and how important for them to follow their fundamentals.

It was a big fight between the government (under the influence of russia) and the people.

The second one tried to defend their rights to freedom of free speech and voice.

"speech and voice" is not commonly used when talking about freedom of speech.

After several months people fiought and finally they won.

This victory cost them a hundred lives, and many wounds.

I think by just adding "and wounds" your flow sounds a bit off.

This is a big price for freedom which you should have had anyway.

Theat government hais gone and for 8 years Ukrainians leaive their life in the way they want.

But then came rRussia and is still now trytrying to destroyed Ukraine.

But ithat will be another story.

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I hope you are safe. Слава Україні!

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tonyabirds

March 12, 2023

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Героям Слава! Yes, thank you ♡ !

9 years ago I lived in Ukraine, of course, I was younger I couldn't understand how the problem was big and how this doing will change my life and my country's life.


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9 years ago I lived in Ukraine, o. Of course, I was younger and I couldn't understand how big the problem was big and how this doing willould change my life and my country's life.

Movie review "Winter on fire"


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Movie review "Winter on fFire"

Make sure to capitalize the main words in the title of the movie!

For me, this movie is not typical and not just next in my line "want to see next".


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For me, this movie is not typical and not just next ion my line "want to see next" list.

In English we usually refer to the movies or shows we want to watch next as a "list", not "line"

"Winter on fire" is a documentary movie.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"Winter on fFire" is a documentary movie.

The picture shows how powerful Ukranian people can be and how important for them to follow their fundamentals.


The picture shows how powerful Ukrainian people can be and how important for them to follow their fundamentals.

The picture shows how powerful the Ukrainian people can be and how important it is for them to follow their fundamentals.

It was a big fight between the government (under the influence of russia) and the people.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ItThere was a big fight between the government (under the influence of rRussia) and the people.

To make this sentence clearer, you could say "the people of Ukraine" instead of only "the people".

The second one tried to defend their rights to freedom of speech and voice.


The second one tried to defend their rights to freedom of free speech and voice.

"speech and voice" is not commonly used when talking about freedom of speech.

The second one tried to defend their rights to freedom of speech and voice.

After several months people fight and finally they won.


After several months people fiought and finally they won.

After several months people fiought and finally they won.

I might reword this sentence as: "The people fought for several months, then finally they won."

This victory cost them a hundred lives, and wounds.


This victory cost them a hundred lives, and many wounds.

I think by just adding "and wounds" your flow sounds a bit off.

This victory cost them a hundred lives, and wounds.

Saying "and wounds" at the end disrupts the flow of this sentence. Instead I might say something like "This victory cost them a hundred lives and caused many wounds."

This is a big price for freedom which you should have had anyway.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is a big price for freedom which youthe people of Ukraine should have had anyway.

Your sentence was correct but it was a little unclear who "you" was referring to. I think adding a specific group of people makes it more clear!

The government has gone and for 8 years Ukrainians leave their life in the way they want.


Theat government hais gone and for 8 years Ukrainians leaive their life in the way they want.

The government has gone and for 8 years Ukrainians leahave lived their life in the way they want.

But then came russia and still now try destroyed Ukraine.


But then came rRussia and is still now trytrying to destroyed Ukraine.

But then came russia and still now tryRussia came and tried to destroyed Ukraine.

But it will be another story.


But ithat will be another story.

But ithat will be another story.

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