March 19, 2023
Movie Review for "Magic Mike's Last Dance".
Oh, when I saw a poster for this movie, I promised myself to watch it.
As for me, this film is like a big jump to my teenage years. In that years my bestie and I liked movies with guys in good shape, and Channing Tatum was very popular.
"Magic Mike's Last Dance" is not something spatial. This movie is without any deep meaning. This movie is about emotions and if you didn't watch a similar type of film when you were a teenager you wouldn't like it.
Mike is a strep throat in the past. At some charity party, he won a chance to earn 6000$ just for one dance. He was so good that the rich woman for whom he danced proposed to him to be a director in her theater. The owner of the theater is Salma Hayek and she is not at the top of my actress rating. Her husband attempted to fail this idea with the strip director, but Mike won this fight and made the show. This is the end of the story. A small bonus for you, Mike and the rich woman fell in love. Right now you know the whole story and will scroll through this film when will look for something to watch.
"Magic Mike's Last Dance" is not something spatiiritual.
Mike ishas had a strep throat in the past.
In thatose years my bestie and I liked movies with guys in good shape, and Channing Tatum was very popular.
"Magic Mike's Last Dance" is not something spatecial.
I think you mean special here. If not I am unsure what you mean be spatial.
Mike is a strep throatwas a ??? in the past.
I have no idea what this means. Are you saying he was poor in the past?
Her husband attempted to failblock this idea with the strip director, but Mike won this fight and made the show.
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This subject and your comments made me laugh. I am sure Magic Mike isn't for everyone but now I am tempted to watch the film! Well done on the English.
March 19, 2023
Mike is a strep throatwas a ??? in the past.
OMG, I just understand what I wrote 🤣. I mean " Mike was a stripper. Is it makes sense?))
In thatose years my bestie and I liked movies with guys in good shape, and Channing Tatum was very popular.
When that is plural it becomes "those"
At some charity party, he wongot a chance to earn $6000$ just for one dance.
If you saying that he got the opportunity to dance to earn money you would probably use "to get" instead of won.
Also we put the dollars symbol in front of the amount of money.
He was so good that the rich woman for whom he danced for proposed to him to be a director in her theatere.
If your saying someone did something for someone else make sure to use "for" at the end.
Her husband attempted to fail this idea with the strip director, but Mike won this fight and made the show.
I wasn't sure if you meant that he tried to fall. You might of also meant that he failed to carry out the idea, where you wouldn't of used attempted.
Right now you know the whole story and you will scrollwatch through this film when willyou look for something to watch.
It makes sense without saying you will instead of will but I think it sound better. I'm not sure if "scroll" is what you meant. You might of wanted to say "watch". If you change that to "to watch" it sounds wrong using it twice in a sentence so you could change the second "to watch" to "to do" or just remove "to watch" but it changes what the sentence means slightly.
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Well done, nice English. I also recommend using less sentences and more connectives.
March 19, 2023
Thank you for corrections and the description.
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Movie Review for "Magic Mike's Last Dance". |
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Oh, when I saw a poster for this movie, I promised myself to watch it. |
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As for me, this film is like a big jump to my teenage years. |
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In that years my bestie and I liked movies with guys in good shape, and Channing Tatum was very popular. In th When that is plural it becomes "those" In th |
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"Magic Mike's Last Dance" is not something spatial. "Magic Mike's Last Dance" is not something sp I think you mean special here. If not I am unsure what you mean be spatial. "Magic Mike's Last Dance" is not something sp |
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This movie is without any deep meaning. |
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This movie is about emotions and if you didn't watch a similar type of film when you were a teenager you wouldn't like it. |
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Mike is a strep throat in the past. Mike I have no idea what this means. Are you saying he was poor in the past? Mike |
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At some charity party, he won a chance to earn 6000$ just for one dance. At some charity party, he If you saying that he got the opportunity to dance to earn money you would probably use "to get" instead of won. Also we put the dollars symbol in front of the amount of money. |
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He was so good that the rich woman for whom he danced proposed to him to be a director in her theater. He was so good that the rich woman for whom he danced for proposed to him to be a director in her theat If your saying someone did something for someone else make sure to use "for" at the end. |
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The owner of the theater is Salma Hayek and she is not at the top of my actress rating. |
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Her husband attempted to fail this idea with the strip director, but Mike won this fight and made the show. Her husband attempted I wasn't sure if you meant that he tried to fall. You might of also meant that he failed to carry out the idea, where you wouldn't of used attempted. Her husband attempted to |
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This is the end of the story. |
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A small bonus for you, Mike and the rich woman fell in love. |
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Right now you know the whole story and will scroll through this film when will look for something to watch. Right now you know the whole story and you will It makes sense without saying you will instead of will but I think it sound better. I'm not sure if "scroll" is what you meant. You might of wanted to say "watch". If you change that to "to watch" it sounds wrong using it twice in a sentence so you could change the second "to watch" to "to do" or just remove "to watch" but it changes what the sentence means slightly. |
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