March 13, 2023
I am sure people who like the movie industry heard about yesterday's Oscar ceremony. First of all, I want to tell you my opinion of the winner "Everything. Everywhere. All at once". Nobody asks me, but I will tell.
It is just not my type of movie. For sure director's work is amazing, the actor's play was cool, the animation was done on a high level. But it is still fantasy. I have one thing that I liked, this is the actor's speeches. One of the main actors said he spent one year in a refugee camp (this is very common for me), and he had never minded that he will hold an Oscar-like award for his work. These words give me a big hope that every dream can become reality.
The second one is the winner of the nomination for "Documentary movie". I have no desire to talk about the winner because it was a big mistake. But it will be a big pleasure to tell you about one of the applicants, the movie "A house made of splinters".
This picture describes a short part of a big work children's shelter that stay on the border of war. I am a person without children and even my hurt can't be indifferent to this story. A lot of scenes show me what a huge closeness can be between a child and his parents. And it doesn't matter how parents can be tough on their children. Time goes and parents don't come, children go to foster families and siblings stay separate.
When I watched this movie everything frosted inside me. "A house made of splinters" is the best documentary movie I have ever watched.
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First of all, I want to tell you my opinion of the winner "Everything.
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It is just not my type of movie.
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I have no desire to talk about the winner because ithat was a big mistake.
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This picture describes a short part of a big work children's shelter that stayis located on the border of war.
I am a person without children and even my hurtfeelings can't be indifferent to this story.
A lot of scenes showed me what a hughow huge the closeness can be between a child and his parents.
And it doesn't matter how tough parents can be tough on their children.
Time goes andon as parents don't come, back so children go to foster families and siblings stayare separated.
When I watched this movie, everything frosted inside me.
"A hHouse mMade of sSplinters" is the best documentary movie I have ever watched.
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I'm going to try to watch it. Thanks for telling us about it.
Movie review: "A house made on splinters".
I am sure people who like the movie industry heard about yesterday's Oscar ceremony.
First of all, I want to tell you my opinion of the winner, "Everything.
Nobody asksed me, but I will tellshare anyway.
Sounds more natural.
It is just not my type of movie.
For sure the director's work is amazing, the actor's playacting was cool, and the animation was done on a high level.
I'm not sure what you mean by 'play', but I'm guessing you mean 'acting'. I could be wrong.
But it is still fantasy.
I haveThere is one thing that I liked, this i. It was the actor's speeches.
It needs to be separated into two sentences or re-written such as: The only thing I liked was the actor's speeches.
One of the main actors said he spent one year in a refugee camp (this is very common for me), and he had never minded that he will holdould not earn an Oscar-like award for his work.
These words give me a big hope that every dream can become reality.
The second one is the winner of the nomination for "Documentary movie".
I have no desire to talk about the winner because it was a big mistake.
But it will beHowever, it is a big pleasure to tell you about one of the applicantnominees, the movie "A hHouse mMade of sSplinters".
Typically you can't start a sentence with 'but'. 'However' is a good replacement.
This picture describes a short part of a big work children's shelter that stay on the border of war.
I am a person without children and even my hueart can't be indifferent to this story.
A lot of scenes show me what a hugthe closeness can be between a child and his parents.
And iIt doesn't matter how parents can be tough on their children.
Typically sentences don't start with 'and'.
Time goes on and parents don't come, children go to foster families and siblings stay separate.
When I watched this movie, everything frostedze inside me.
"A hHouse mMade of sSplinters" is the best documentary movie I have ever watched.
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Great job! Just a couple of stylistic things and small errors.
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Plural possessive: actors' |
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