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ellielcin

Nov. 26, 2023

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I have a couple things to say for this one. First of all, I was casually enjoying it from the beginning until closure part comes up and changes my idea. Don't get me wrong, on an emotional level I cried and enjoyed the unnecessary death of the main lead anyway BUT still, it left me disappointed and kind of lost regarding the plot in general. On top of every hole throughout the plot that they didn't bother to fill up, they left us uninformed about the reason of the main lead's unnecessary sudden death. Why did they even do it? How come it serves the plot or anything? It started as a high school sweet&silly romance and for a dramatic ending, there would have been many other ways to make the audience emotionally impressed.

Despite the poor ending, acting performances are great and it is okay to watch if you are looking for a light movie with some high school romance.

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I have a couple of things to say for this one.

First of all, I was casually enjoying it from the beginning until closure part comes up and changes my ideaI watched the ending, which changed how I felt about this movie.

Don't get me wrong, on an emotional level I cried and enjoyed the unnecessary death of the main lead anyway BUT still, it left me disappointed and kind of lost regarding the plot in general.

On top of every hole throughout the plotplot hole that they didn't bother torector/scriptwriters faill uped to explain , they left us uninformed aboutin the dark (more idiomatic) as to the reason/cause of the main lead's unexpected and unnecessary sudden death.

I wouldn't use the term "plot hole" so literally

How come it serves the plot or anything?is it even relevant to the plot?

It started as a high school sweet&sillysweet and silly (cheesy) high school romance and for such a dramatic ending, there wcould have been many other ways to make the audience emotionally impressed.

Despite the poor ending, actingthe performances are great and it is okay to watch if you are looking for a light-hearted movie with some high school romance.

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Some parts sounded awkward but I made them more natural, other than your grammar structure is pretty good . Tebrikler =)

First of all, I was casually enjoying it from the beginning until closure part comes up andthroughout but the ending changesd my ideaopinion.

Don't get me wrong, it worked on an emotional level I cried and enjoyedand had me crying. I was affected by the (unnecessary) death of the main lead anyway BUT still, it left me disappointed and kind of lost regarding the plot in general.

enjoyed implies that you liked it, it was entertaining
unnecessary death - casual way of writing, sounds flippant - have put in brackets as a way of adding information
Changed word order to sound more natural

On top of every hole throughout the plot that they didn't bother to fill up, they left us uninformed about the reason of the main lead's unnecessary sudden death.

On top of every plot hole that they didn't bother to fill, they left us uninformed about the reason for the main lead's unnecessary, sudden death

Why did they even do it?

How comedoes it serves the plot or anything else?

It started as a high school sweet&silly romance and for a dramatic ending,sweet & silly high school romance and there would have been many other ways to makengage the audience emotionally impressed.and create a dramatic ending.

various ways to discuss the impact of an emotional ending but "emotionally impressed" is not a phrase

Despite the poor ending, the acting performances are great and it i's okay to watch if you are looking for a light movie with some high school romance.

mMovie rReview

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I have a couple things to say for this one.

First of all, I was casually enjoying ithe movie from the beginning until closure part comes up andthe (ending / finale) changesd my ideamind.

Don't get me wrong, on an emotional level I cried and enjoyed the unnecessary death of the main lead anyway. BUTut still, it left me disappointed and kind of lost regarding the plot in general.

On top of every hole throughout the plothole that they didn't bother to fill up, they left us uninformed aboutof the reason ofor the main lead's unnecessary sudden death.

Why did they even do it?

How come iWhen it doesn't serves the plot or anything?

It started as a high school sweet&sillysilly and sweet high school romance and forended with a dramatic ending, t. There would have been many other ways to make the audience emotionally imprnvessted.

Despite the poor ending, actingthe actor's performances awere great and it i's okay to watch if you are looking for a light movie with some high school romance.

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ellielcin

Nov. 27, 2023

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thank you very much :)

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mMovie rReview

Titles are always capitalized

I have a couple things to say for this one.


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I have a couple of things to say for this one.

First of all, I was casually enjoying it from the beginning until closure part comes up and changes my idea.


First of all, I was casually enjoying ithe movie from the beginning until closure part comes up andthe (ending / finale) changesd my ideamind.

First of all, I was casually enjoying it from the beginning until closure part comes up andthroughout but the ending changesd my ideaopinion.

First of all, I was casually enjoying it from the beginning until closure part comes up and changes my ideaI watched the ending, which changed how I felt about this movie.

Don't get me wrong, on an emotional level I cried and enjoyed the unnecessary death of the main lead anyway BUT still, it left me disappointed and kind of lost regarding the plot in general.


Don't get me wrong, on an emotional level I cried and enjoyed the unnecessary death of the main lead anyway. BUTut still, it left me disappointed and kind of lost regarding the plot in general.

Don't get me wrong, it worked on an emotional level I cried and enjoyedand had me crying. I was affected by the (unnecessary) death of the main lead anyway BUT still, it left me disappointed and kind of lost regarding the plot in general.

enjoyed implies that you liked it, it was entertaining unnecessary death - casual way of writing, sounds flippant - have put in brackets as a way of adding information Changed word order to sound more natural

Don't get me wrong, on an emotional level I cried and enjoyed the unnecessary death of the main lead anyway BUT still, it left me disappointed and kind of lost regarding the plot in general.

On top of every hole throughout the plot that they didn't bother to fill up, they left us uninformed about the reason of the main lead's unnecessary sudden death.


On top of every hole throughout the plothole that they didn't bother to fill up, they left us uninformed aboutof the reason ofor the main lead's unnecessary sudden death.

On top of every hole throughout the plot that they didn't bother to fill up, they left us uninformed about the reason of the main lead's unnecessary sudden death.

On top of every plot hole that they didn't bother to fill, they left us uninformed about the reason for the main lead's unnecessary, sudden death

On top of every hole throughout the plotplot hole that they didn't bother torector/scriptwriters faill uped to explain , they left us uninformed aboutin the dark (more idiomatic) as to the reason/cause of the main lead's unexpected and unnecessary sudden death.

I wouldn't use the term "plot hole" so literally

Why did they even do it?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Why did they even do it?

How come it serves the plot or anything?


How come iWhen it doesn't serves the plot or anything?

How comedoes it serves the plot or anything else?

How come it serves the plot or anything?is it even relevant to the plot?

It started as a high school sweet&silly romance and for a dramatic ending, there would have been many other ways to make the audience emotionally impressed.


It started as a high school sweet&sillysilly and sweet high school romance and forended with a dramatic ending, t. There would have been many other ways to make the audience emotionally imprnvessted.

It started as a high school sweet&silly romance and for a dramatic ending,sweet & silly high school romance and there would have been many other ways to makengage the audience emotionally impressed.and create a dramatic ending.

various ways to discuss the impact of an emotional ending but "emotionally impressed" is not a phrase

It started as a high school sweet&sillysweet and silly (cheesy) high school romance and for such a dramatic ending, there wcould have been many other ways to make the audience emotionally impressed.

Despite the poor ending, acting performances are great and it is okay to watch if you are looking for a light movie with some high school romance.


Despite the poor ending, actingthe actor's performances awere great and it i's okay to watch if you are looking for a light movie with some high school romance.

Despite the poor ending, the acting performances are great and it i's okay to watch if you are looking for a light movie with some high school romance.

Despite the poor ending, actingthe performances are great and it is okay to watch if you are looking for a light-hearted movie with some high school romance.

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