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jihad

Oct. 18, 2021

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movie or book

it depends on the type of the movie. But in general i do prefer movies over books. Movies can convey the message of the scenario in broder way otherwise is hard by books to get the same message of that certain scenario. For example, we have the famous Harry Potter series films. what i did first is that i have read the philosoph's stone novel and then watched the movie. There were a huge difference for me on how certain things perceived from movies to books. the feelings and experiences we get out of movies is just awesome.

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mMovies or bBooks?

In English, the first letter of all adverbs, adjetives, verbs, nouns, etc., is capitalized in the title.

iIt depends on the type of the movie, but, in general, I do prefer movies over books.

These were two sentence fragments that needed to be combined.

But in general i do prefer movies over books.

Movies can convey the message of the scenariotheme's message in broader way otherwise is hard b, but it's hard to compete with the way books to getconvey theat same message of that certain scenario.

I had a little trouble understanding what you were trying to say, but I think this is what you meant.

For example, we have movies of the famous Harry Potter series films.

what i did first is that i have read tFirst I read the novel "The pPhilosopher's sStone novel", and then I watched the movie.

There were a huge difference for me on how I perceived certain things perceived from movies todifferently in the movie than from in the books.

tThe feelings and experiences we get out of movies is just awesome.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

For example, we have the famous Harry Potter series films.


For example, we have movies of the famous Harry Potter series films.

what i did first is that i have read the philosoph's stone novel and then watched the movie.


what i did first is that i have read tFirst I read the novel "The pPhilosopher's sStone novel", and then I watched the movie.

movie or book


mMovies or bBooks?

In English, the first letter of all adverbs, adjetives, verbs, nouns, etc., is capitalized in the title.

it depends on the type of the movie.


iIt depends on the type of the movie, but, in general, I do prefer movies over books.

These were two sentence fragments that needed to be combined.

But in general i do prefer movies over books.


But in general i do prefer movies over books.

Movies can convey the message of the scenario in broder way otherwise is hard by books to get the same message of that certain scenario.


Movies can convey the message of the scenariotheme's message in broader way otherwise is hard b, but it's hard to compete with the way books to getconvey theat same message of that certain scenario.

I had a little trouble understanding what you were trying to say, but I think this is what you meant.

There were a huge difference for me on how certain things perceived from movies to books.


There were a huge difference for me on how I perceived certain things perceived from movies todifferently in the movie than from in the books.

the feelings and experiences we get out of movies is just awesome.


tThe feelings and experiences we get out of movies is just awesome.

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