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July 7, 2023

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mouse'sMice

the plural of mouse

oOnce, there was a little mouse, and it lived ion the street. One of the mousesice was a cthief.

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mouse'sMice

The plural of "mouse" is "mice". By using an apostrophe, it means that the mouse owns something. For instance, "The mouse's house" would mean the mouse owned a house.

oOnce, there was a little mouse,i. It lived in street. One of the mousesice was a chief.

You will want to capitalize the first word of each sentence. Also, to prevent run-on sentences, you will need to end with a period instead of a comma (,). Finally, you need to place a space after each punctuation mark ( . or , ).

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Your spelling was good! The main issues seemed to be stylistic, but that is not a huge thing to worry about when you are starting out so I think you are doing really good :)

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kiko

July 8, 2023

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Thakss(:it's a story about chef

mouse'sMice

Mouse’s is possessive, so you can say, “The mouse’s home”, or “The mouse’s job”.

Mice is plural to talk about 2 or more.

oOnce, there was a little mouse,i that lived ion the street. One of the mousesice was a chief.

Chief is a leader, is that what you want to say? Chef is someone who cooks food. Either is fine, but I am wondering if you meant chef!

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I would love to hear more of this story. 😊 I want to hear about what happens to this mouse who is living on the street! Good job.

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July 8, 2023

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mouse'sMice

HAHAAA.thanks!But why do you say that mice have a strong possessiveness:)

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July 8, 2023

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oOnce, there was a little mouse,i that lived ion the street. One of the mousesice was a chief.

lol.YOU Are right.I made a mistake,thanks!

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kiko

July 8, 2023

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thankss.I will:)

mouse's


mouse'sMice

Mouse’s is possessive, so you can say, “The mouse’s home”, or “The mouse’s job”. Mice is plural to talk about 2 or more.

mouse'sMice

The plural of "mouse" is "mice". By using an apostrophe, it means that the mouse owns something. For instance, "The mouse's house" would mean the mouse owned a house.

mouse'sMice

the plural of mouse

once,there was a little mouse,it lived in street.One of the mouses was a chief


oOnce, there was a little mouse,i that lived ion the street. One of the mousesice was a chief.

Chief is a leader, is that what you want to say? Chef is someone who cooks food. Either is fine, but I am wondering if you meant chef!

oOnce, there was a little mouse,i. It lived in street. One of the mousesice was a chief.

You will want to capitalize the first word of each sentence. Also, to prevent run-on sentences, you will need to end with a period instead of a comma (,). Finally, you need to place a space after each punctuation mark ( . or , ).

oOnce, there was a little mouse, and it lived ion the street. One of the mousesice was a cthief.

this flows better

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