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Mount Everest

Recently, we heard about a group of hikers who were trapped by a storm while they were trying to reach Everest´s summit and were later guided to safety by Tibet´s guides. This story makes us think about the difficult situation that this world wonder face with all the tourism that received annually and that is turning in a huge problem for the mountain ecosystem, despite the fact that the community that lives around the climb depends economically of the money that bring the visits that are willing to pay a massive amount of money to became in one of the hikers that reach the top of the world.

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Mount Everest

Recently, we heard about a group of hikers who were trapped by a storm while they were trying to reach Everest´s summit and were later guided to safety by Tibet´s guides.

This story makes us think about the difficult situation that this world wonder face ws. With all the tourism that it receiveds annually and tha, it is turning into a huge problem for the mountain ecosystem, despite the fact that the community that lives around the climb depends economically ofn the money that bring the visitse visits bring. People that are willing to pay a massive amount of money to becaome in one of the hikers that reach the top of the world.

This is a bit of a run on sentence which makes it hard to decide what to change. Overall the Grammer is generally good. Just a few tweaks.

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Jessica75

Oct. 8, 2025

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Thanks very much, this helps me so much. I need to improve to take an English exam. I will take note of your corrections

Mount Everest

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Recently, we heard about a group of hikers who were trapped by a storm while they were trying to reach Everest´s summit and were later guided to safety by Tibet´s guides.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This story makes us think about the difficult situation that this world wonder face with all the tourism that received annually and that is turning in a huge problem for the mountain ecosystem, despite the fact that the community that lives around the climb depends economically of the money that bring the visits that are willing to pay a massive amount of money to became in one of the hikers that reach the top of the world.

This story makes us think about the difficult situation that this world wonder face ws. With all the tourism that it receiveds annually and tha, it is turning into a huge problem for the mountain ecosystem, despite the fact that the community that lives around the climb depends economically ofn the money that bring the visitse visits bring. People that are willing to pay a massive amount of money to becaome in one of the hikers that reach the top of the world.

This is a bit of a run on sentence which makes it hard to decide what to change. Overall the Grammer is generally good. Just a few tweaks.

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