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meriemdel

Aug. 9, 2024

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Motivation

Before starting anything in life , one needs to have that little push. It gives him hope , enthusiasm and maybe even energy to break the cycle of everyday’s routine.

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Motivation

Before starting anything in life , one needs to have that little push.

It gives hithem hope , enthusiasm, and maybe even the energy to break the cycle of everyday’s routine.

The sentence is clear, but there should be no space before the comma, and “everyday’s routine” is not correct; it should be “everyday routine” or “the everyday routine.”

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The sentence is generally clear, but there are a couple of minor issues. Firstly, there should be no space before commas. Secondly, “everyday’s routine” is incorrect; “everyday routine” is the correct phrasing. Also, consider using “them” instead of “him” for more inclusivity.

It gives himone hope , enthusiasm and maybe even energy to break the cycle of one’s every day’s routine.

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curonevans

Aug. 20, 2024

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Good stuff

Motivation


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Before starting anything in life , one needs to have that little push.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It gives him hope , enthusiasm and maybe even energy to break the cycle of everyday’s routine.


It gives himone hope , enthusiasm and maybe even energy to break the cycle of one’s every day’s routine.

It gives hithem hope , enthusiasm, and maybe even the energy to break the cycle of everyday’s routine.

The sentence is clear, but there should be no space before the comma, and “everyday’s routine” is not correct; it should be “everyday routine” or “the everyday routine.”

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