March 13, 2021
Motion Sickness
I went out for a drive with my friends yesterday. One of my friends was not good at driving and the way was winding roads in mountains, so I almost got motion sickness. It was like a roller coaster; I felt continuous changing of lateral and vertical acceleration. I endured the situation closing my eyes. The driving was enjoyable but I won't ride a car he drives.
Motion Sickness
I went out for a drive with my friends yesterday.
One of my friends was not good at driving and the way wasre were a lot of winding roads in the mountains, so I almost got motion sickness.
This sounds more natural in the US.
It was like a roller coaster; I felt continuousthe constant changing of lateral and vertical acceleration.
I'm actually not sure how to say this in English so this is my best guess. Just reading this makes my belly lurch.
I endured the situation by closing my eyes.
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I survived the situation by closing my eyes.
I survived the ride by closing my eyes.
I survived by closing my eyes.
The drivinge was enjoyable but I won't ride in a car he drives.
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The drive was enjoyable but I won't go again if he drives.
The drive was enjoyable but I won't join them again if he's driving.
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Excellent job! I get motion sickness, too, and your description of your friend's driving makes me feel queasy.
March 14, 2021
Thank you for your correction!
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I went out for a drive with my friends yesterday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One of my friends was not good at driving and the way was winding roads in mountains, so I almost got motion sickness. One of my friends was not good at driving and the This sounds more natural in the US. |
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It was like a roller coaster; I felt continuous changing of lateral and vertical acceleration. It was like a roller coaster; I felt I'm actually not sure how to say this in English so this is my best guess. Just reading this makes my belly lurch. |
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I endured the situation closing my eyes. I endured the situation by closing my eyes. or I survived the situation by closing my eyes. I survived the ride by closing my eyes. I survived by closing my eyes. |
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The driving was enjoyable but I won't ride a car he drives. The driv or The drive was enjoyable but I won't go again if he drives. The drive was enjoyable but I won't join them again if he's driving. |
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