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kazu

May 19, 2020

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mother's day

Yesterday,I couldn’t write a diary cuz I had an online drinking with high school friends,and got drunk. I’ll be careful not to be a day where I don’t keep a diary. Today, I hung out with my girlfriend at her house. Today was Mother’s Day, so I went to buy a cake for my mom with my gf. My mom does the laundry and cooks meals for me every day without complaining. It’s because of her that I am able to live without any inconvenience. So, I have to thank her and I want to. By the way, it’s my mother birthday tomorrow.

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mMother's dDay

Yesterday,I couldn’t write a diary cuz I had anbecause I was online drinking with high school friends,and got drunk.

Today, I hung out with my girlfriend at her house.

Today was Mother’s Day, so I went to buy a cake for my mom with my gf.

My mom does the laundry and cooks meals for me every day without complaining.

It’s because of her that I am able to live without any inconvenience.

So, I have to thank her and I want to.

By the way, it’s also my mother's birthday tomorrow.

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kazu

May 20, 2020

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thank you so much!

mother's day

Yesterday,I couldn’t write a diary cuz I had an online drinking with high school friends,and got drunk.

I’ll be careful for there to not to be a day where I don’t keep amy diary.

Not to be a day is talking about yourself buy youre a human not a day so you have to clarify that youre talking about a day where in the future you dont write an entry, and again same mistake as last time youre talking about YOUR diary not just some diary.

Today, I hung out with my girlfriend at her house.

Today was Mother’s Day, so I went to buy a cake for my mom with my gf.

My mom does the laundry and cooks meals for me every day without complaining.

It’s because of her that I am able to live without any inconvenience.

So, I have to thank her and I want to.

By the way, it’s my mother birthday tomorrow.

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I love this one it almost has 0 mistakes and is just lovely.

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odythewriter

May 19, 2020

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By the way, it’s my mother birthday tomorrow.

It's my mother's birthday tomorrow.

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kazu

May 19, 2020

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thank you so much!

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mMother's dDay

Yesterday,I couldn’t write a diary cuz I had an online drinking with high school friends,and got drunk.


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Yesterday,I couldn’t write a diary cuz I had anbecause I was online drinking with high school friends,and got drunk.

I’ll be careful not to be a day where I don’t keep a diary.


I’ll be careful for there to not to be a day where I don’t keep amy diary.

Not to be a day is talking about yourself buy youre a human not a day so you have to clarify that youre talking about a day where in the future you dont write an entry, and again same mistake as last time youre talking about YOUR diary not just some diary.

Today, I hung out with my girlfriend at her house.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today was Mother’s Day, so I went to buy a cake for my mom with my gf.


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My mom does the laundry and cooks meals for me every day without complaining.


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It’s because of her that I am able to live without any inconvenience.


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So, I have to thank her and I want to.


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By the way, it’s my mother birthday tomorrow.


By the way, it’s also my mother's birthday tomorrow.

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