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Scarlett_Father

April 12, 2024

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Most happiest ward in the hospital

When it comes to hospital wards, we typically think these are rooms that house sick persons who are suffering from specific diseases. However, I think that patients who are staying in delivery rooms can be perceived as the happiest ones among these patients in hospitals. All their relatives are expecting new lives to arrive, and delivery rooms are always full of joy and excitement.

I hope more of these types of patients stay in hospitals and bring new lives to our living planet.

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MostThe happiest ward in the hospital

When it comes to hospital wards, we typically think these areof them as rooms that house sick personsople who are suffering from specific diseases.

However, I think that patients who are staying in delivery rooms can be perceived as the happiest ones among these patients in hospitals.

All their relatives are expecting new lives to arrive, and delivery rooms are always full of joy and excitement.

I hope more of these types of patients stay in hospitals and bring new lives to our living planet.

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Oh, that's true! It hadn't quite occurred to me before!

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Scarlett_Father

April 13, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections!

MostThe happiest ward in the hospital

When it comes to hospital wards, we typically think theseat they are rooms that house sick personsople who are suffering from specificcertain diseases.

However, I think that patients who are staying in delivery rooms can be perceived as the happiest ones among all of these patients in hospitals.

All their relatives areEveryone is expecting a new livesaddition to their family to arrive, and delivery rooms are always full of joy and excitement.

I hope more of these types of patients stay in hospitals and bring new lives to our living planetworld.

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Scarlett_Father

April 12, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections!

Most happiesty ward in the hospital

When it comes to hospital wards, we typically think of these are rooms that house sick personsople who are suffering from specific diseases.

It was difficult to read, so I simplified the sentence.

However, I think that patients who are staying in delivery rooms can be perceived as the happiest ones among these patients in hospitals.

All their relatives are expecting new lives to arrive, and delivery rooms are always full of joy and excitement.

'New lives' is correct, but you could instead write 'new life' because it sounds more natural.

I hope more of these types of patients stay in hospitals and bring new lives to our living planet.

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Overall, great writing!

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Scarlett_Father

April 12, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections!

Most happiest ward in the hospital


Most happiesty ward in the hospital

MostThe happiest ward in the hospital

MostThe happiest ward in the hospital

When it comes to hospital wards, we typically think these are rooms that house sick persons who are suffering from specific diseases.


When it comes to hospital wards, we typically think of these are rooms that house sick personsople who are suffering from specific diseases.

It was difficult to read, so I simplified the sentence.

When it comes to hospital wards, we typically think theseat they are rooms that house sick personsople who are suffering from specificcertain diseases.

When it comes to hospital wards, we typically think these areof them as rooms that house sick personsople who are suffering from specific diseases.

However, I think that patients who are staying in delivery rooms can be perceived as the happiest ones among these patients in hospitals.


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However, I think that patients who are staying in delivery rooms can be perceived as the happiest ones among all of these patients in hospitals.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

All their relatives are expecting new lives to arrive, and delivery rooms are always full of joy and excitement.


All their relatives are expecting new lives to arrive, and delivery rooms are always full of joy and excitement.

'New lives' is correct, but you could instead write 'new life' because it sounds more natural.

All their relatives areEveryone is expecting a new livesaddition to their family to arrive, and delivery rooms are always full of joy and excitement.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope more of these types of patients stay in hospitals and bring new lives to our living planet.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope more of these types of patients stay in hospitals and bring new lives to our living planetworld.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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