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alexwong2164

Nov. 16, 2020

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Mortal Combat

After finish the 7 days boring training course.

First thing I go home to do is play video games!

Mortal combat is the one I pick.

I might just played 1 hour approximately.

But my finger is too painful and I need to stop.

Someday I will just keep play video games all day all night.

Actually this is the 25th times I participated this training camp.

A quarter century!

But under the threat of virus.

Everybody just go home just and avoid grouping together.

I hate you! (Virus)

Corrections

After finishing the 7 days boring 7 day training course.

FThe first thing I did was go home to do is play video games!

I picked Mortal cCombat is the one I pick.

I might just played 1 houthought I might play for approximately just 1 hour.

But my finger iit was too painful and I neefor my finger so I had to stop.

Someday I will just keep playing video games all day and all night.

Actually this is the 25th times I participated in this training camp.

A quarter century!

But under the threat of a virus.

Everybody just gowent home just and avoided grouping together.

I hate you!

(Virus)

After finish the 7 days boring training course.,

Fthe first thing I do is go home to do isand play video games!

This and the sentence should be joined together since the other one doesn't make sense by itself.

I might just played for 1 hour approximately.

But my finger is too painful and I needhave to stop.

Somedays, I will just keep playing video games all day and all night.

Actually, this is the 25th times I participated in this training camp.

A quarter centuryof a hundred!

A century is for a hundred years.

But under the threat of virus.,

Eeverybody just goes home just and avoids grouping together.

Again, the other sentence doesn't make sense on it's own so it should be joined with this one.

I hate you!

(The Virus)

Mortal Combat


After finish the 7 days boring training course.


After finish the 7 days boring training course.,

After finishing the 7 days boring 7 day training course.

First thing I go home to do is play video games!


Fthe first thing I do is go home to do isand play video games!

This and the sentence should be joined together since the other one doesn't make sense by itself.

FThe first thing I did was go home to do is play video games!

Mortal combat is the one I pick.


I picked Mortal cCombat is the one I pick.

I might just played 1 hour approximately.


I might just played for 1 hour approximately.

I might just played 1 houthought I might play for approximately just 1 hour.

But my finger is too painful and I need to stop.


But my finger is too painful and I needhave to stop.

But my finger iit was too painful and I neefor my finger so I had to stop.

Someday I will just keep play video games all day all night.


Somedays, I will just keep playing video games all day and all night.

Someday I will just keep playing video games all day and all night.

Actually this is the 25th times I participated this training camp.


Actually, this is the 25th times I participated in this training camp.

Actually this is the 25th times I participated in this training camp.

A quarter century!


A quarter centuryof a hundred!

A century is for a hundred years.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But under the threat of virus.


But under the threat of virus.,

But under the threat of a virus.

Everybody just go home just and avoid grouping together.


Eeverybody just goes home just and avoids grouping together.

Again, the other sentence doesn't make sense on it's own so it should be joined with this one.

Everybody just gowent home just and avoided grouping together.

I hate you!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

(Virus)


(The Virus)

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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