Nov. 24, 2022
Morning walk
I've moaned here recently that I need more walks but I don't do it anything about it. Yesterday in the evening I checked the weather forecast and I decided to go for a walk in the morning. The weather will promise well. No rain finally. After my breakfast, after I got dressed I asked my husband did he wanted to go with me. He said yes straight away so we put our coats and shoes on and we were ready to go. It was cloudy and a bit chilly but it was nice got some fresh air. We walked around our neighbourhood. It's a small park there where people walks dogs and there is a playground as well. We went to the playground. It was a small zip line there. When I was a kid we didn't have something like that. I had to try it! My husband slided as well. It was a good fun. I felt like a child again. I'd like to try a big zip line one day.
Morning walk
I've moaned here recently that I need more walks but I don't do it anything about it.
This is not incorrect but 'I need more walks' doesn't sound very natural, it sounds more like you are talking about a dog or something! I would probably say 'I need to walk more'
Yesterday in the evening I checked the weather forecast and I decided to go for a walk in the morning.
The weather willlooked promise welling.
No rain finally.
You could also emphasise this with punctuation. No rain, finally!
After my breakfast, after I got dressed and I asked my husband did he wanted to go with me.
'did he want to go with me?' OR if he wanted to go with me.
He said yes straight away so we put our coats and shoes on and we were ready to go.
It was cloudy and a bit chilly but it was nice and we got some fresh air.
We walked around our neighbourhood.
It's a small park there where people walks dogs and there is a playground as well.
people needs third person singular conjugation, as it is a collective noun. I would probably have written 'where people walk their dogs' but what you have written is not incorrect
We went to the playground.
ItThere was a small zip line there.
When I was a kid we didn't have someanything like that.
Something vs anything https://www.ecenglish.com/learnenglish/lessons/anything-nothing-something-everything#:~:text=Something%20means%20a%20thing%20that,in%20questions%20and%20negative%20sentences
I had to try it!
My husband slided as well.
Past tense of to slide is slid. You could also use the phrasal verb 'to slide down'. I actually don't know what the right verb is for zip lines! Hopefully someone will suggest it here :-)
It was a good fun.
I felt like a child again.
I'd like to try a big zip line one day.
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Dec. 6, 2022
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Morning walk This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I've moaned here recently that I need more walks but I don't do it anything about it. I've moaned here recently that I need more walks but I don't do it anything about it. This is not incorrect but 'I need more walks' doesn't sound very natural, it sounds more like you are talking about a dog or something! I would probably say 'I need to walk more' |
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Yesterday in the evening I checked the weather forecast and I decided to go for a walk in the morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The weather will promise well. The weather |
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No rain finally. No rain finally. You could also emphasise this with punctuation. No rain, finally! |
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After my breakfast, after I got dressed I asked my husband did he wanted to go with me. After my breakfast, 'did he want to go with me?' OR if he wanted to go with me. |
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He said yes straight away so we put our coats and shoes on and we were ready to go. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was cloudy and a bit chilly but it was nice got some fresh air. It was cloudy and a bit chilly but it was nice and we got some fresh air. |
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We walked around our neighbourhood. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's a small park there where people walks dogs and there is a playground as well. It's a small park there where people walk people needs third person singular conjugation, as it is a collective noun. I would probably have written 'where people walk their dogs' but what you have written is not incorrect |
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We went to the playground. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a small zip line there.
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When I was a kid we didn't have something like that. When I was a kid we didn't have Something vs anything https://www.ecenglish.com/learnenglish/lessons/anything-nothing-something-everything#:~:text=Something%20means%20a%20thing%20that,in%20questions%20and%20negative%20sentences |
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I had to try it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My husband slided as well. My husband slided as well. Past tense of to slide is slid. You could also use the phrasal verb 'to slide down'. I actually don't know what the right verb is for zip lines! Hopefully someone will suggest it here :-) |
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It was a good fun. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I felt like a child again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'd like to try a big zip line one day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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