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Flan_girl

Jan. 7, 2021

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Morning

I woke up at five today and, despite wanting to sleep, I enjoy the silence a lot. My family is asleep and a part of the city is too.
I had breakfast in my room while watching a sitcom. After writing this, I have to study. At noon, I have driving lessons. Later, I'll have to keep studying.
I don't know why, but when I'm busy I think of lots of fun or interesting things to do. However, when I'm free, I get bored because I don't know what to do.

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Morning

I woke up at five today and, despite wanting to sleep, I am enjoying the silence a lot.

I think this is a better way to transition between past and present tense

My family is asleep and a part of the city is too.

I had breakfast in my room while watching a sitcom.

After I writinge this, I have to study.

At noon, I have driving lessons.

Later, I'll have to keep studying.

I don't know why, but when I'm busy I think of lots of fun or interesting things to do.

However, when I'm free, I get bored because I don't know what to do.

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Good work! What are you studying?

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Flan_girl

Jan. 7, 2021

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Thanks! I'm studying to get my driver's license.

Morning


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I woke up at five today and, despite wanting to sleep, I enjoy the silence a lot.


I woke up at five today and, despite wanting to sleep, I am enjoying the silence a lot.

I think this is a better way to transition between past and present tense

My family is asleep and a part of the city is too.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had breakfast in my room while watching a sitcom.


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After writing this, I have to study.


After I writinge this, I have to study.

At noon, I have driving lessons.


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Later, I'll have to keep studying.


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I don't know why, but when I'm busy I think of lots of fun or interesting things to do.


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However, when I'm free, I get bored because I don't know what to do.


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