Jan. 4, 2022
More sentences I wanted to be corrected
1)what both don´t know is that all the adventuer that they could only dream about are going to start becoming true ( I´m describing the plot of a book)
2)The Bible has been translated TO many languages or the bible has been translated INTO to many languages
3)In 12 countries in where six of them has been a success.
4)Gohan was teletransported to Kaio sama´s planet with Goku´s help.
5)He met his best friend's cousin ,Alex, which instantly he became friends with
6)the movie has amazing and expensive sets.
7)When you read a book, do you immerse in the story? (I´m trying to say that you dive into the book in a way it´s like you are living it)
8)If your parents work you can stay with other family members that live near your house.
9)Do you live your children in nurseries?
More sentences I wanted to be corrected
"Wanted" is correct, but since you still want it "want" is better.
1)what both don´t know is that all the adventuere that they could only dream about are going to start becoming true ( I´m describing the plot of a book)
Maybe, "Neither of them knew that the adventure they could only dream about was about to come true."
2)The Bible has been translated TO many languages or the bible has been translated INTO to many languages
into
3)In 12 countries in whereich six of them has been a success.
Hmm, this seems like a partial sentence. It's hard to correct without the full context.
4)Gohan was teletransported to Kaio sama´s planet with Goku´s help.
I assume "teletransported" is a science fiction word, not a mistake, otherwide it should be "transported."
5)He met his best friend's cousin , Alex, whicho he instantly he became friends with
Make sure the spacing around the commas are correct.
6)the movie has amazing and expensive sets.
7)When you read a book, doare you immersed in the story?
(I´m trying to say that you dive into the book in a way it´s like you are living it)
8)If your parents work you can stay with other family members that live near your house.
9)Do you livraise your children in nurseries?
The children live in nurseries, you don't "live" them.
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Jan. 4, 2022
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More sentences I wanted to be corrected More sentences I want "Wanted" is correct, but since you still want it "want" is better. |
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1)what both don´t know is that all the adventuer that they could only dream about are going to start becoming true ( I´m describing the plot of a book) 1)what both don´t know is that all the adventu Maybe, "Neither of them knew that the adventure they could only dream about was about to come true." |
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2)The Bible has been translated TO many languages or the bible has been translated INTO to many languages 2)The Bible has been translated TO many languages or the bible has been translated INTO to many languages into |
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3)In 12 countries in where six of them has been a success. 3)In 12 countries in wh Hmm, this seems like a partial sentence. It's hard to correct without the full context. |
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4)Gohan was teletransported to Kaio sama´s planet with Goku´s help. 4)Gohan was teletransported to Kaio sama´s planet with Goku´s help. I assume "teletransported" is a science fiction word, not a mistake, otherwide it should be "transported." |
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5)He met his best friend's cousin ,Alex, which instantly he became friends with 5)He met his best friend's cousin Make sure the spacing around the commas are correct. |
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6)the movie has amazing and expensive sets. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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7)When you read a book, do you immerse in the story? 7)When you read a book, |
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(I´m trying to say that you dive into the book in a way it´s like you are living it) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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8)If your parents work you can stay with other family members that live near your house. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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9)Do you live your children in nurseries? 9)Do you The children live in nurseries, you don't "live" them. |
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