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Tammy

April 18, 2024

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More about Baduanjin

As I wrote in the last entry, Baduanjin the Eight Trigrams Boxing is easy, brief and efficient.

It might have been kept this way since 1200 years ago. Its main postures were found in the Han Dynasty artifacts. Then Taoists developed it in the Song Dynasty, approximately 800 years ago. That's why it's a little similar to Taichi, the most famous form of Taoist Kongfu.

I think there are three reasons why Baduanjin become more and more popular.

The first one is that after COVID-19, many people have some lingering physical problems. Those problems may be not easy to recover from or too tiny to use medicines. So people try to get some help from exercise.

The second reason is that some people found it useful after practicing Baduanjin. So they told their friends about it and encouraged them to try it too.

And the third one, I think it's an essential one for myself, is that the only change you need to make in your daily life is to get up 15 minutes early.

Time versus gain. It's a bargain!


如我的前一篇里提到的,八段锦简单、简短又高效。

它可能从1200年前就一直保持这样了。它的主要姿势在汉代文物中有发现。然后道士们在大约800年前的宋朝发展了它。这就是为什么它有点像太极——最著名的道教功夫。

我认为八段锦越来越受欢迎的原因有三。

第一,新冠肺炎疫情后,很多人还有后遗症。这些问题可能不容易恢复,或者太小而不需要使用药物。所以人们试图从运动中获得一些帮助。

第二个原因是有些人在练习八段锦后发现它很有用。于是他们告诉了他们的朋友,并鼓励他们也去尝试。

第三点,对我来说很重要的一点,那就是你在日常生活中唯一需要做的改变就是早起15分钟。

时间vs收益。很划算!

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More about Baduanjin

As I wrote in the last entry, Baduanjin the Eight Trigrams Boxing is easy, briefquick and efficient.

"Brief" works here but "quick" sounds more native.

It might have been kept this way sincefor 1200 years ago.

Its main postures were found in the Han Dynasty artifacts.

Then Taoists developed it in the Song Dynasty, approximately 800 years ago.

That's why it's a little similar to Taichi, the most famous form of Taoist Kongfu.

I think there are three reasons why Baduanjin become more and more popular.

The first one is that after COVID-19, many people have some lingering physical problems.

Those problems may be not easy to recover from or too tiny to use medicines.

So people try to get some help from exercise.

The second reason is that after practicing Baduanjin, some people found it useful after practicing Baduanjin.

So they told their friends about it and encouraged them to try it too.

And the third one, I think it's an essential one for myself, is that the only change you need to make in your daily life is to get up 15 minutes early.

Time versus gain.

It's a bargain!

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Very interesting! Good job.

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Tammy

April 19, 2024

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Thank you!

Have a nice weekend!

It might have been kept this way since 1200 years ago.

Technically you can say "It might have been kept this way", but it looks more natural to have "It might have been this way"

Then Taoists then developed it in the Song Dynasty, approximately 800 years ago.

I think there are three reasons why Baduanjin become more and more popular.

You can start your sentence with "Personally,", though the way it is now is also fine

The first one is that after COVID-19, many people haved some lingering physicalresidual health problems.

Those problems may be not be easy to recover from, or too tiny to userivial to need medicines.

SoThus, people try to get some help fromimprove their health through exercise.

So they told their friends about it and encouraged them to try it too.

You should connect this sentence to the previous one, or begin your sentence differently.

And the third one,- which I think it's an essential one for myself,- is that the only change you need to make in your daily life is to get up 15 minutes earlyier.

Time versus gain.; it's a bargain!

It's a bargain!

You should connect this to your previous sentence.

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I didn't know Baduanjin could help with the residual symptoms of COVID-19, that was interesting! Good job!

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Tammy

April 18, 2024

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Thank you for the corrections and feedback!

I didn't know either until two of my friends recommended it to me at about the same time.

More about Baduanjin

As I wrote in the last entry, Baduanjin the Eight Trigrams Boxing is easy, brief and efficient.

It might have been kept this way since 1200 years ago.

Its main postures were found in the Han Dynasty artifacts.

Then Taoists developed it in the Song Dynasty, approximately 800 years ago.

That's why it's a little similar to Taichi, the most famous form of Taoist Koungf Fu.

I'm not sure whether Kongfu is correct or not, but it's usually spelt Kung Fu or Kungfu in English.

I think there are three reasons why Baduanjin is becomeing more and more popular.

The first one is that after COVID-19, many people have some lingering physical problems.

Those problems may be not be easy to recover from or too tiny to ustake medicines for.

So people try to get some help from exercise.

The second reason is that some people found itBaduanjin useful after practicing Baduanjinit.

So they told their friends about it and encouraged them to try it too.

And the third one, I think it's an essential one for myself, is that the only change you need to make in your daily life is to get up 15 minutes early.

When you want to interrupt the sentence with a thought or remark, it is better to use dashes. You could also use parenthesis here.

Time versus gain.

It's a bargain!

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

April 18, 2024

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Thank you for the corrections and feedback! I learned a lot from them.

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More about Baduanjin

As I wrote in the last entry, Baduanjin the Eight Trigrams Boxing is easy, brief and efficient.

It might have beenwas probably kept this way since 1200 years ago.

Its main postures were found in the Han Dynasty artifacts.

Then Taoists developed it in the Song Dynasty, approximately 800 years ago.

That's why it's a little similar to Taichi, the most famous form of Taoist Kongfu.

I think there are three reasons why Baduanjin is becomeing more and more popular.

The first one is that after COVID-19, many people have some lingering physical problems.

Those problems may be not be easy to recover from or too tinyrivial to use medicines.

So people try to get some help from exercise.

The second reason is that some people found it useful after practicing Baduanjin useful.

So they told their friends about it and encouraged them to try it too.

And the third one, I think it's an essential one for myself, is that the only change you need to make in your daily life is to get up 15 minutes early.

Time versus gain.

It's a bargain!

Feedback

Wonderful!

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Tammy

April 18, 2024

1

Thank you!

Have a nice day!

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"Brief" works here but "quick" sounds more native.

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Those problems may be not easy to recover from or too tiny to use medicines.


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And the third one, I think it's an essential one for myself, is that the only change you need to make in your daily life is to get up 15 minutes early.


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And the third one, I think it's an essential one for myself, is that the only change you need to make in your daily life is to get up 15 minutes early.

When you want to interrupt the sentence with a thought or remark, it is better to use dashes. You could also use parenthesis here.

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