Dec. 18, 2021
Moonlight
I had a long walk with a girl tonight. We went to visited her classmate by chance. It's about 3km away. We came home after seven. Though there were few street lamps on the country road, moonlight was so bright that we even didn't need a torch. The moon was very big and round in the sky. It was very peaceful all the way, which I loved so much.
I had a wonderful night.
Moonlight
I hadwent on a long walk with a girl tonight.
We went to visited one of her classmates by chance.
If she has many classmates and you haven't mentioned it earlier, best to say "one of her classmates" here.
It'sShe lived about 3km away.
"it's" is a bit ambiguous here.
We came home after seven.
Though there were few street lamps on the country road, the moonlight was so bright that we even didn't need a torch.
The moon was very big and round in the sky.
It was very peaceful all the way, which I loved so much.
I had a wonderful night.
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Very nicely written, and what a wonderful night that must've been for you guys! :D
Dec. 20, 2021
Thank you
Moonlight
I hadtook a long walk with a girl tonight.
We went toded up visiteding her classmate by chance.
It's about 3km away.
We camereturned home after seven.
Though there were few street lamps on the country road, and the moonlight was so bright that we even didn't even need a torch.
The moon was very big and round in the sky.
It was very peaceful all the way, which I loved so much.
I had a wonderful night.
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It sounds like you had a wonderful time :)
Dec. 19, 2021
Thank you.
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