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Moomin
Hello, this is my first post. I love the Moomin story series. I'm a big fan of the author, Tove Jansson. I am collecting Moomin goods little by little. My favorite character is Snufkin. I really want to visit Moominvalley Park in Saitama, Japan someday.
こんにちは。これは私の最初の投稿です。私はムーミンの物語のシリーズが好きです。私は作者のトーベ・ヤンソンのファンです。私は少しずつ、ムーミンのグッズを集めています。私が一番好きなのはスナフキンです。いつか日本の埼玉のムーミンバレーパークに行ってみたいです。
Moomin
Hello, this is my first post.
I love the Moomin story series.
I'm a big fan of the author, Tove Jansson.
I am collecting Moomin goods little by little.
My favorite character is Snufkin.
I really want to visit Moominvalley Park in Saitama, Japan someday.
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Excellent work! Your sentences are well-structured and show great enthusiasm for the Moomin series.
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Thank you for the feedback, alexcjwei. I'll write more.
Moomin
Hello, this is my first post.
I love the Moomin story series.
You don't need to specify "story", just "series" works.
I'm a big fan of the author, Tove Jansson.
I am collecting Moomin goods little by little.
The sentence is correct, but you can also use "merchandise" instead of "goods". It sounds more natural to me.
My favorite character is Snufkin.
I really want to visit Moominvalley Park in Saitama, Japan someday.
Feedback
Great first post! I don't know much about Moomin but I've always been interested in learning more, especially the TV series.
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Thank you for your corrections. I love the TV series "Moominvalley." I watched it in both English and Japanese.
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I love the Moomin story series. I love the Moomin You don't need to specify "story", just "series" works. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm a big fan of the author, Tove Jansson. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am collecting Moomin goods little by little. I am collecting Moomin goods little by little. The sentence is correct, but you can also use "merchandise" instead of "goods". It sounds more natural to me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My favorite character is Snufkin. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I really want to visit Moominvalley Park in Saitama, Japan someday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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