Dec. 21, 2021
I started to play jazz drums 2 years ago. Recently, I practice the song 'Numb' a lot. Its bpm is 110, which is quite fast. Its rythm isn't complicated, so it isn't hard to play. I practice it a lot, so that I can play it without music score. What I want to reach is that I can play it by my heart, in other words, I can really enjoy it, become a part of it. By now, when I play the song, I always feel relieve at the beginning. For the reason, when I feel bad, I always practice the song. After playing it half an hour later, I will feel irritable. Maybe because it is too noisy for continuing listening for thirty minutes. Then I will change a lively song like 'Yellow' to makes me feel good again.
It seems that I play drums isn't because of love of music, but the need of mood ventilation.
After playing it half an hour later, I will feel half hour into playing the song, I start to get irritable.
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I started to playing jazz drums 2 years ago.
Recently, I've been practiceing the song 'Numb' a lot.
It's bpm is 110played at 110 bpm, which is quite fast.
ItsThe rhythm isn't complicated, so it isn't hard to play.
I practice it a lot, so that I can eventually play it without musicthe score sheet.
What I want to reach is thatthe level where I can play it by my heart,; in other words, where I can really enjoy it, become a part of it.
By now, when I play the song, I always feel relieve atd in the beginning.
Relaxed可能更合适
For the reason, when I feel bad, I always practice theis song.
After playing it half an hour lafter, I will feel I play it, I will start to get irritable.
Maybe because it is too noisy forto continuinge listening to for thirty minutes straight.
Then, I will change to a lively song like 'Yellow' to makes meyself feel good again.
It seems that I play drums isn't becausenot out of a love of music, but rather the need of mood ventilationto blow off steam.
如果用“不是因为…”就要说“什么什么的原因不是因为…”
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Nice work
Recently, I've practiced/I've been practicing the song 'Numb' a lot.
I've practiced or I've been practicing works better than the present tense here, as it flows more naturally :)
Its rhythm isn't complicated, so it isn't hard to play.
Spelling of rhythm was incorrect. A common way for English people to remember the spelling of this word is: 'Run Home Your Teacher Has Measles' (R-H-Y-T-H-M)
What I want to reach is that I can play it by my heart, or in other words, I can really enjoy it, and become a part of it.
For theis reason, when I feel bad, I always practice the song.
After playing it for half an hour later, I will begin to feel irritable.
This helps the sentence to flow a bit better :D
Maybe because it is too noisy for continuing listenito keep listening to this song for thirty minutes.
Then I will change to a lively song like 'Yellow' to- this makes me feel good again.
It seems that I play the drums isn'not because of a love of music, but instead the need of a mood ventilation.ve improvement.
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Hey this was really good! It was really well written and enjoyable. The main corrections that I made were to give this a better flow, but all in all, this is very good!
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I started to play jazz drums 2 years ago. I started |
Recently, I practice the song 'Numb' a lot. Recently, I've practiced/I've been practicing the song 'Numb' a lot I've practiced or I've been practicing works better than the present tense here, as it flows more naturally :) Recently, I've been practic |
Its bpm is 110, which is quite fast. It's |
Its rythm isn't complicated, so it isn't hard to play. Its rhythm isn't complicated, so it isn't hard to play. Spelling of rhythm was incorrect. A common way for English people to remember the spelling of this word is: 'Run Home Your Teacher Has Measles' (R-H-Y-T-H-M)
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I practice it a lot, so that I can play it without music score. I practice it a lot, so that I can eventually play it without |
What I want to reach is that I can play it by my heart, in other words, I can really enjoy it, become a part of it. What I want to reach is that I can play it by
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By now, when I play the song, I always feel relieve at the beginning. By now, when I play the song, I always feel relieve Relaxed可能更合适 |
For the reason, when I feel bad, I always practice the song. For th For the reason, when I feel bad, I always practice th |
After playing it half an hour later, I will feel irritable. After playing it for half an hour This helps the sentence to flow a bit better :D A A |
Maybe because it is too noisy for continuing listening for thirty minutes. Maybe because it is too noisy Maybe because it is too noisy |
Then I will change a lively song like 'Yellow' to makes me feel good again. Then I will change to a lively song like 'Yellow' Then, I will change to a lively song like 'Yellow' to make |
It seems that I play drums isn't because of love of music, but the need of mood ventilation. It seems that I play the drums It seems that I play drums 如果用“不是因为…”就要说“什么什么的原因不是因为…” |
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