Dec. 21, 2021
Mood
I started to play jazz drums 2 years ago. Recently, I practice the song 'Numb' a lot. Its bpm is 110, which is quite fast. Its rythm isn't complicated, so it isn't hard to play. I practice it a lot, so that I can play it without music score. What I want to reach is that I can play it by my heart, in other words, I can really enjoy it, become a part of it. By now, when I play the song, I always feel relieve at the beginning. For the reason, when I feel bad, I always practice the song. After playing it half an hour later, I will feel irritable. Maybe because it is too noisy for continuing listening for thirty minutes. Then I will change a lively song like 'Yellow' to makes me feel good again.
It seems that I play drums isn't because of love of music, but the need of mood ventilation.
I practice it a lot, so that I can play it without a music score.
If you're refering to something (Ex, a music score, a book, a pen.) You must have an article 9The, a/an) before it.
By now, when I play the song, I always feel relieved at the beginning.
For theis reason, when I feel bad, I always practice the song.
Maybe because it i's too noisy for continuingto listening to for thirty minutes.
Your original sentence makes sense, however it is very cluttered and hard to understand at first glance.
Then I will change to a lively song like 'Yellow' to makes me feel good again.
It seems that I play drums isn'not because of my love of music, but themy need of mood ventilationto boost my mood.
No idea why you're using "ventilation" in this context, perhaps you meant something like enhance, boost, promote?
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Gald to find another music enjoyer! Overall pretty good, watch out for missplaced spellings/grammer!
Dec. 29, 2021
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I started to play jazz drums 2 years ago. |
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Recently, I practice the song 'Numb' a lot. |
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Its bpm is 110, which is quite fast. |
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Its rythm isn't complicated, so it isn't hard to play. |
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I practice it a lot, so that I can play it without music score. I practice it a lot, so that I can play it without a music score. If you're refering to something (Ex, a music score, a book, a pen.) You must have an article 9The, a/an) before it. |
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What I want to reach is that I can play it by my heart, in other words, I can really enjoy it, become a part of it. |
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By now, when I play the song, I always feel relieve at the beginning. By now, when I play the song, I always feel relieved at the beginning. |
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For the reason, when I feel bad, I always practice the song. For th |
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After playing it half an hour later, I will feel irritable. |
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Maybe because it is too noisy for continuing listening for thirty minutes. Maybe because it Your original sentence makes sense, however it is very cluttered and hard to understand at first glance. |
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Then I will change a lively song like 'Yellow' to makes me feel good again. Then I will change to a lively song like 'Yellow' to make |
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It seems that I play drums isn't because of love of music, but the need of mood ventilation. It seems that I play drums No idea why you're using "ventilation" in this context, perhaps you meant something like enhance, boost, promote? |
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