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Monument of a hare

The legend says that the great Russian poet Pushkin wanted to take part in the nobility's rebellion against new tsar, but when he set off to St.Peterburg a hare crossed his way, so he took around. A popular Russian belief says that a hare crossed one's way brings misfortune. Russian historians think that this belief saved Pushkin's life, because that rebellion was quelled, five persons were hanged and many others were sent to Siberia. Now we have in Russia not only many monuments of Pushkin himself, but also a monument of a hare, who saved poet's life.

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Monument tof a hare

in the sense that it is honor of the hare

The legend says that the great Russian poet Pushkin wanted to take part in the nobility'sles' rebellion against the new tsar, but when he set off to St. Petersburg, a hare crossed his waypath, so he took aroundurned back. (or) turned around and went back.

A popular Russian belief says that if a hare crosseds one's way brings misfortunepath, it brings bad luck.

Now we have in Russia not only many monuments tof Pushkin himself, but also a monument of a hare, whoto the hare that saved the poet's life.

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Jan. 8, 2022

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Thank you very much for your corrections!

Monument of a hare

TheA legend says that the great Russian poet Pushkin wanted to take part in the nobility's rebellion against the new tsar, but when he set off to St.Peterburg a hare crossed his way, so he tookurned around.

Missing an article before tsar, and I think you meant he turned around after the hare crossed his way.

A popular Russian belief says that a hare crossed one's way brings misfortune.

Russian historians think that this belief saved Pushkin's life, because that rebellion was quelled, five personsople were hanged and many others were sent to Siberia.

The plural of person is usually people, and “persons” is an older-sounding word.

Now we have in Russia not only many monuments of Pushkin himself, but also a monument of a hare, who saved the poet's life.

Missing an article for the poet.

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You only had very tiny mistakes and this story was really interesting to read. Keep it up! :)

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Jan. 8, 2022

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TheA legend says that the great Russian poet Pushkin wanted to take part in the nobility's rebellion against the new tsar, but when he set off to St.Peterburg a hare crossed his way, so he tookurned around.

Yes, I meant that, thank you!

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Jan. 8, 2022

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Thank you very much for your corrections, explanations and encourangement!

Monument of a hare


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Monument tof a hare

in the sense that it is honor of the hare

The legend says that the great Russian poet Pushkin wanted to take part in the nobility's rebellion against new tsar, but when he set off to St.Peterburg a hare crossed his way, so he took around.


TheA legend says that the great Russian poet Pushkin wanted to take part in the nobility's rebellion against the new tsar, but when he set off to St.Peterburg a hare crossed his way, so he tookurned around.

Missing an article before tsar, and I think you meant he turned around after the hare crossed his way.

The legend says that the great Russian poet Pushkin wanted to take part in the nobility'sles' rebellion against the new tsar, but when he set off to St. Petersburg, a hare crossed his waypath, so he took aroundurned back. (or) turned around and went back.

A popular Russian belief says that a hare crossed one's way brings misfortune.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A popular Russian belief says that if a hare crosseds one's way brings misfortunepath, it brings bad luck.

Russian historians think that this belief saved Pushkin's life, because that rebellion was quelled, five persons were hanged and many others were sent to Siberia.


Russian historians think that this belief saved Pushkin's life, because that rebellion was quelled, five personsople were hanged and many others were sent to Siberia.

The plural of person is usually people, and “persons” is an older-sounding word.

Now we have in Russia not only many monuments of Pushkin himself, but also a monument of a hare, who saved poet's life.


Now we have in Russia not only many monuments of Pushkin himself, but also a monument of a hare, who saved the poet's life.

Missing an article for the poet.

Now we have in Russia not only many monuments tof Pushkin himself, but also a monument of a hare, whoto the hare that saved the poet's life.

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