Dec. 17, 2019
Monday
I'm going on a business trip to Vancouver tomorrow. I don't really like go to Vancouver in this season because it's always raining. Also, I can't have much time to go around and enjoy traveling. I hope to visit Vancouver for vacation in summer.
Monday
I'm going on a business trip to Vancouver tomorrow.
I don't really like to go to Vancouver in this seasone winter because it's always raining.
You should be more specific (in the summer, etc)
Also, I cawon't have much time to go around and enjoy traveling.
I hope to visit Vancouver in the summer for vacation in summer.
Feedback
I hope there won't be much rain there Sari. Please be safe and don't get sick :) Drink hot chocolate over there and write about it! :D
Dec. 18, 2019
Thank you:) I will drink hot coffee and drive safe
Monday
I'm going to Vancouver on a business trip to Vancouver tomorrow.
Your sentence is okay but this sounds more natural to me.
I don't really like go to Vancouver in this seasonwinter because it's always raining.
Your sentence is okay but this sounds more natural.
Also, I cawon't have much time to gowalk around and enjoy traveling.
Or: Also, I never have much time to enjoy traveling.
* If you don't mean "walk around" you can omit this part, like my example above.
I hope to visit Vancouver for vacation in summer.
Feedback
Nice job!
Dec. 18, 2019
Thank you:) It helps me a lot!
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Also, I can't have much time to go around and enjoy traveling. Also, I Or: Also, I never have much time to enjoy traveling. * If you don't mean "walk around" you can omit this part, like my example above. Also, I |
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