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ellablue

Oct. 9, 2021

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Mon Appartement

Je habite dans mon appartement avec mon ami. Mon appartement a six pièces. Il y a ma chambre, et ma salle de bains. Il y a la chambre et la salle de bains de mon ami. Il y a aussi notre cuisine et notre salon. La cuisine est petite. La pièce favorite est le balcon. Le balcon a beaucoup de plantes. Nous cultivons des tomates.

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Mon Aappartement

French titles are capitalized like normal sentences in French

Je 'habite dans moun appartement avec mon ami.

Je + unvoiced "h" = je + vowel => j'

Mon appartement a six pièces.

Il y a la chambre et la salle de bains de mon ami.

Il y a aussi notre cuisine et notre salon.

La cuisine est petite.

La pièceMa/notre endroit favorite est le balcon.

"pièce" rather refers to something enclosed, it doesn't really suit a balcony
As "favorite" is related to a taste/a personal preference, it's almost exclusively used with possessive pronounced, either "ma" (your favorite place) or "notre" (your and your friend's favorite place)

Le balcon a beaucoup de plantes.

Nous cultivons des tomates.

Mon Appartement


Mon Aappartement

French titles are capitalized like normal sentences in French

Je habite dans mon appartement avec mon ami.


Je 'habite dans moun appartement avec mon ami.

Je + unvoiced "h" = je + vowel => j'

Mon appartement a six pièces.


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Il y a ma chambre, et ma salle de bains.


Il y a la chambre et la salle de bains de mon ami.


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Il y a aussi notre cuisine et notre salon.


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La cuisine est petite.


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La pièce favorite est le balcon.


La pièceMa/notre endroit favorite est le balcon.

"pièce" rather refers to something enclosed, it doesn't really suit a balcony As "favorite" is related to a taste/a personal preference, it's almost exclusively used with possessive pronounced, either "ma" (your favorite place) or "notre" (your and your friend's favorite place)

Le balcon a beaucoup de plantes.


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Nous cultivons des tomates.


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