Nov. 5, 2024
Moms of the world Part 1
In August, rice suddenly disappeared at supermarkets.
I dashed to the supermarket nearby after watching the news about lack of rice.
When I saw a few packs of rice, I thought I was lucky, and I stretched my hand to take one, then a family was coming toward me.
I saw two little kids in the middle of growing, and I pulled my hand back.
I bought only vegetable and came home.
How do I live without rice? While I was thinking so, I was watching YouTube.
Then, I found a video that an European woman cooked pasta.
8月、突然スーパーから米が消えた。
米不足のニュースを見て、駆け足でスーパーに行ったら、まだ米が２、３パックあったので、ラッキーと思い手を伸ばそうとしたら、小さな子供を２人連れた家族がやってきた。
育ち盛りの子供を見て、笑いは手を引っ込めて野菜だけを買って帰った。
お米なしでどうしたもんかと考えながらYouTubeを見ていると、あるヨーロッパ人の女性がパスタを作るビデオを見つけた。
In August, rice suddenly disappeared atfrom supermarkets.
I dashed to the supermarket nearby after watching the news about the lack of rice.
instead of 'the lack of rice', you could also say 'the rice shortage'
When I saw a few packbags of rice, I thought I was lucky, and. I stretched out my hand to take one, but then I saw a family was coming toward me.
This sentence was quite long, so I split it into two sentences.
I saw two little kids in the middle of growinggrowing children, and I pulled my hand back.
I bought only vegetables and came home.
How dowill I live without rice?
Since you are thinking about the future, you should use 'will'.
While I was thinking thiso, I was watching YouTube.
Then, I found a video thatof an European woman cookeding pasta.
You could also say 'I found a video that said European women cooked pasta'
Nov. 7, 2024
Thank you very much for the correction and the advice. They are very helpful!
Moms of the world Part 1
In August, rice suddenly disappeared atfrom the supermarkets.
I dashed to the supermarket nearby after watching the news about the lack of rice.
When I saw a few packs of rice left, I thought I was lucky, and I stretached my handout to take one,. But then I saw a family was coming toward me.
I saw two little kids in the middle of growing, and I pulled my hand back. They needed the rice more than I did because they are still growing.
I bought only vegetables and came home.
If it's only one vegetable, though, we usually say what it is, e.g., "I just bought a cabbage/zucchini/beetroot"
How do I live without rice?
While I was thinking sothis thought, I was watching YouTube.
Then, I found a video thaabout an European woman cookeding pasta.
Nov. 7, 2024
Thank you very much for the correction and the advice. They are very helpful!
In August, rice suddenly disappeared atfrom the supermarket shelves.
Or:
In August, it was suddenly impossible to buy rice at the supermarkets.
I dashed to the supermarket nearby after watching the news about lacknd hearing about the shortage of rice.
When I saw a few packs of rice, I thought I was lucky, and. As I stretched out my hand to take one, thenI noticed a family suddenly was coming towards me.
I saw two little kids in the middle of growing, and I pulled my hand back.small children and I pulled my hand back; it didn't feel right to take the last of the rice from from growing children.
I only bought onlysome vegetables and came home.
How do I live without rice?
While I was thinking about thiso, I was watching YouTube.
Or:
I was watching YouTube as I was thinking about this.
Then, I found a video thaabout an European woman cookedwho made (fresh) pasta.
Nov. 7, 2024
Thank you very much for the corrections and the paraphrases. I can learn a lot.
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I saw two little kids in the middle of growing, and I pulled my hand back. I saw two I saw two little kids I saw two |
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I bought only vegetable and came home. I only bought I bought only vegetables and came home. If it's only one vegetable, though, we usually say what it is, e.g., "I just bought a cabbage/zucchini/beetroot" I bought only vegetables and came home. |
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How do I live without rice? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! How Since you are thinking about the future, you should use 'will'. |
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While I was thinking so, I was watching YouTube. While I was thinking about this Or: I was watching YouTube as I was thinking about this. While I was thinking While I was thinking this |
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