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kiwy

Sept. 25, 2021

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There are a lot of people talking about their own friends' reflection of Meng Wanzhou, the daughter of Ren Zhengfei, has been back to China.
I haven't been using the Wechat Moments for a few years. So I don't know what my friends' opinion. However, I don't want to know as well.
The reason why I stopped using the Moments was to protect myself. I thought I was very easy to be influent by the other people. When I saw someone do better than me such as in career, income, etc, I would feel depressive easily. So, I needed to desparated myself from the outside surrounding to stay peaceful. I also didn't want to waste time in it. Furthermore, I don't want to mix up my personal life and work in the Moments.
I did stay peaceful since then. I became more concentrat on myself, started to ingnore the others who I didn't care about.
As a kid, I was always being compared to the other kid, who was industrious than me or got better scores than me, etc. As an adult, I am being compared to the others who has higher income than me or got married early. Once I was very upset by my mother's judgement, but I will argue with her about this. She never concerned about me at all. But I don't desire her love anymore.

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There are a lot of people talking about their own friends' reflectopinions ofn Meng Wanzhou, the daughter of Ren Zhengfei, has been backwho has returned to China.

I haven't been using theused Wechat Moments forin a few years.

So I don't know what my friends' opinions might be.

Connect to previous sentence

However, I don't really want to know as welleither.

The reason why I stopped using the Moments was to protecthelp myself.

I thought I was very easy to be influent by theced by other people on there.

When I saw someone do better than me such as in career, income, etc., I would feel depressived easily.

So, I needed to deseparated myself from the outside surrounding to stayinfluences to find peaceful.

I also didn't want to waste time ion it.

Furthermore, I don't want to mix up my personal life and work in the Moments.

I did stayhave been peaceful since then.

I became morewas able to concentrate more on myself, and I started to ingnore the others who I didn't care about.

As a kid, I was always being compared to the other kid,s who was industriousere more hardworking than me or, got better scores than me, etc.

As an adult, I am being compared to the others who hasve higher income than me or got married early.

Once I wasI used to feel very upsehurt by my mother's judgement, but I will argue with her about this kind of thing now.

Once in this context would be 有一次 not 曾经.

She was never concerned aboutfor me at all.

But I don't desirecare about her love anymore.

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Nice writing! Sorry your relationship with your mom is not so great. I'm not on social media either, I never felt the need to look at what everyone else is doing, especially since it's mostly embellished.

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There are a lot of people talking about their own friends' reflection of Meng Wanzhou, the daughter of Ren Zhengfei, has been back to China.


There are a lot of people talking about their own friends' reflectopinions ofn Meng Wanzhou, the daughter of Ren Zhengfei, has been backwho has returned to China.

I haven't been using the Wechat Moments for a few years.


I haven't been using theused Wechat Moments forin a few years.

So I don't know what my friends' opinion.


So I don't know what my friends' opinions might be.

Connect to previous sentence

However, I don't want to know as well.


However, I don't really want to know as welleither.

The reason why I stopped using the Moments was to protect myself.


The reason why I stopped using the Moments was to protecthelp myself.

I thought I was very easy to be influent by the other people.


I thought I was very easy to be influent by theced by other people on there.

When I saw someone do better than me such as in career, income, etc, I would feel depressive easily.


When I saw someone do better than me such as in career, income, etc., I would feel depressived easily.

So, I needed to desparated myself from the outside surrounding to stay peaceful.


So, I needed to deseparated myself from the outside surrounding to stayinfluences to find peaceful.

I also didn't want to waste time in it.


I also didn't want to waste time ion it.

Furthermore, I don't want to mix up my personal life and work in the Moments.


Furthermore, I don't want to mix up my personal life and work in the Moments.

I did stay peaceful since then.


I did stayhave been peaceful since then.

I became more concentrat on myself, started to ingnore the others who I didn't care about.


I became morewas able to concentrate more on myself, and I started to ingnore the others who I didn't care about.

As a kid, I was always being compared to the other kid, who was industrious than me or got better scores than me, etc.


As a kid, I was always being compared to the other kid,s who was industriousere more hardworking than me or, got better scores than me, etc.

As an adult, I am being compared to the others who has higher income than me or got married early.


As an adult, I am being compared to the others who hasve higher income than me or got married early.

Once I was very upset by my mother's judgement, but I will argue with her about this.


Once I wasI used to feel very upsehurt by my mother's judgement, but I will argue with her about this kind of thing now.

Once in this context would be 有一次 not 曾经.

She never concerned about me at all.


She was never concerned aboutfor me at all.

But I don't desire her love anymore.


But I don't desirecare about her love anymore.

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