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Jack

Feb. 22, 2021

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Moment thinking

Time for everyone is limited, so take your every limited minute to improve yourself instead of doing bad things to others. That is extremely stupid behavior for damaging others, and delaying yourself.

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Moment thinking

I don't know what "Moment thinking" means

Perhaps "A momentary thought" ?

Time for everyone is limited, so take your every limited minutminute you have to improve yourself instead of doing bad things to others.

I realize that I lost the sense of "limited", but I can't think how to fit it in without sounding unusual.

Perhaps

Time for everyone is limited, so take everyone of the few minutes that you do have to ....

That is extremely stupid behavior for, damaging to others, and delayhurting yourself.

I am unsure what "delaying yourself" means

Perhaps "hurting yourself" ?

Or perhaps "wasting your own time" ?

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Jack

Feb. 22, 2021

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Moment thinking

A momentary thought

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Jack

Feb. 22, 2021

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That is extremely stupid behavior for, damaging to others, and delayhurting yourself.

Wasting your own time doesn’t equal “delaying yourself” ?

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zford

Feb. 23, 2021

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You can "delay your start", if you don't leave until later.

I suppose you can "delay yourself" if you do something so that you leave later.

But "delaying yourself" sounds odd, and I wouldn't understand that it means "wasting your time".

Moment thinking


Moment thinking

I don't know what "Moment thinking" means Perhaps "A momentary thought" ?

Time for everyone is limited, so take your every limited minute to improve yourself instead of doing bad things to others.


Time for everyone is limited, so take your every limited minutminute you have to improve yourself instead of doing bad things to others.

I realize that I lost the sense of "limited", but I can't think how to fit it in without sounding unusual. Perhaps Time for everyone is limited, so take everyone of the few minutes that you do have to ....

That is extremely stupid behavior for damaging others, and delaying yourself.


That is extremely stupid behavior for, damaging to others, and delayhurting yourself.

I am unsure what "delaying yourself" means Perhaps "hurting yourself" ? Or perhaps "wasting your own time" ?

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