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b230tri

July 15, 2021

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moment at coast

I saw the sunset today in a long time.
There is coast a half hour drive near my town.
Pinetree forest and little plants named '맥문동' stretches out all around there.

The one most caught my eyes were some kind of sports men.
They were doing some sports looks like surfing but they were also using little parachute to pull their board.
I don't know what it is excatly but it looked quite fun when I stared it.
Six persons, they were not look young so I thought it might be their new interest after retiring and this may be good for their health.
Actually they looked healthy.
They seemed to really enjoy their activites.

And some couples at there, too.
One couple were eating and drinking, sitting on a mat.

Four persons who came late sat down side by side and took selfies.

Some middle aged people had been working out.

two people, perhaps mom and daughter, came with their dogs.

The place was quite.
I felt relaxed.
The sun, the clouds, the coastline, the air, that kind of things make you aware of moment.

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mMoment at con the Coast

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.

I saw the sunset today in a long timfor the first time in a while.

There is coast is about a half hour drive nearfrom my town.

PAround there, the beach is surrounded by a pine tree forest and little plants named '맥문동' stretches out all around there.

The one mostSome kind of sportsmen caught my eyes were some kind of sports menhile I was there.

They were doing some sports looksed like surfing, but they were also using a little parachute to pull their board.

I don't know what it iwas excactly, but while I was watching it it looked quite fun when I stared it.

Six persons, they were noThey were six in total, and they didn't look young so I thought it might be their new interest after retiring and thisat it may be good for their health.

Actually, they looked healthy.

They seemed to really enjoy their activiteswhat they were doing.

And there were some couples at there, too.

One couple wereas sitting on a mat, eating and drinking, sitting on a mat.

I get why you used "were" here, as a couple is made up of two people, but because there's only one couple, you use the singular conjugation.

Four persons whoople came later on, sat down side by side, and took selfies.

Some middle aged people had beenwere working out.

tTwo people, perhaps moma mother and daughter, came with their dogs.

The place was quitet.

I felt relaxed.

The sun, the clouds, the coastline, the air, thatose kinds of things makelet you aware ofbe in the moment.

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moment at coast


mMoment at con the Coast

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.

I saw the sunset today in a long time.


I saw the sunset today in a long timfor the first time in a while.

There is coast a half hour drive near my town.


There is coast is about a half hour drive nearfrom my town.

Pinetree forest and little plants named '맥문동' stretches out all around there.


PAround there, the beach is surrounded by a pine tree forest and little plants named '맥문동' stretches out all around there.

The one most caught my eyes were some kind of sports men.


The one mostSome kind of sportsmen caught my eyes were some kind of sports menhile I was there.

They were doing some sports looks like surfing but they were also using little parachute to pull their board.


They were doing some sports looksed like surfing, but they were also using a little parachute to pull their board.

I don't know what it is excatly but it looked quite fun when I stared it.


I don't know what it iwas excactly, but while I was watching it it looked quite fun when I stared it.

Six persons, they were not look young so I thought it might be their new interest after retiring and this may be good for their health.


Six persons, they were noThey were six in total, and they didn't look young so I thought it might be their new interest after retiring and thisat it may be good for their health.

Actually they looked healthy.


Actually, they looked healthy.

They seemed to really enjoy their activites.


They seemed to really enjoy their activiteswhat they were doing.

And some couples at there, too.


And there were some couples at there, too.

One couple were eating and drinking, sitting on a mat.


One couple wereas sitting on a mat, eating and drinking, sitting on a mat.

I get why you used "were" here, as a couple is made up of two people, but because there's only one couple, you use the singular conjugation.

Four persons who came late sat down side by side and took selfies.


Four persons whoople came later on, sat down side by side, and took selfies.

Some middle aged people had been working out.


Some middle aged people had beenwere working out.

two people, perhaps mom and daughter, came with their dogs.


tTwo people, perhaps moma mother and daughter, came with their dogs.

The place was quite.


The place was quitet.

I felt relaxed.


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The sun, the clouds, the coastline, the air, that kind of things make you aware of moment.


The sun, the clouds, the coastline, the air, thatose kinds of things makelet you aware ofbe in the moment.

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