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plum_mei

Sept. 5, 2025

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Moderation Is Hard 適度は難しい

There’s a lovely bakery about a 10-minute bike ride from my house. The owner bakes bread with great care, using carefully selected ingredients such as natural yeast and organic nuts and berries. Until a few months ago, I used to go there once a week to show my support.

However, I’ve started to feel that the bread is a bit too luxurious for a regular treat. Each piece costs 500 to 600 yen, which is about two or three times the price of bread at other bakeries. On top of that, it’s dangerously delicious, the kind of bread that makes you crave more. It may be made with healthy ingredients, but at the end of the day it is still bread, high in calories and heavy on the wallet. I don’t really need it to live, yet once I buy one I immediately want to go back for another. Moderation is hard when I can’t quite decide what “occasional” should mean.

For me, habits are easiest when I either do them every day or not at all. If it’s something I only do occasionally, it’s better when I do it with someone else. For example, I study English, work out, and clean my room daily. Karate I practice once a week at the dojo, and cake is something I have only when I meet friends. Keeping the rules simple makes them easier to follow.

Even so, I still can’t forget about that bakery. I wonder how the lady who runs it is doing. Maybe I should come up with a rule, like only stopping by when I happen to pass the shop on the way to the post office, so I can enjoy it without going overboard.


家から自転車で10分くらいのところに、素敵なパン屋さんがある。天然酵母や有機食材のナッツやベリーなど、原料にこだわった丁寧なパン作りをしている、応援したい気持ちを込めて、数か月前は1週間に1回は出かけていた。
しかしパンは1つ5、600円で、値段がほかのパン屋の2、3倍することや、おいしすぎて癖になるのはよくないのではないかと考えるようになった。健康的なパンだけど、カロリーや出費のことがある。なければないでやっていけるのだ。それなのに、一回行ったらまた行きたくなる。「たまに楽しむ」というのは、適切な頻度がわからなくて難しい。
習慣というのは、「毎日するか、全くしないか」にしてしまったほうが潔いし簡単だ。それか、たまにしかしないことは、一人ではなく誰かと一緒にすることだ。具体的には、私は英語、筋トレ、掃除は毎日しているが、空手は空手教室に行き、ケーキを友達と会った時に食べる。ルールがシンプルなので続けやすい。
それでも、あのパン屋さんのことは忘れられない。お店のお姉さん、元気かな。例えば郵便局に行くためにパン屋さんの前を通る時だけ行っていいとか、何か適切なルールを作って、ハマりすぎない程度にまた行きたいなと思う。

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Moderation Is Hard 適度は難しい

There’s a lovely bakery about a 10-minute bike ride from my house.

The owner bakes bread with great care, using carefully selected ingredients such as natural yeast and organic nuts and berries.

Until a few months ago, I used to go there once a week to show my support.

However, I’ve started to feel that the bread is a bit too luxurious forto be enjoyed as a regular treat. (or to be enjoyed regularly.)

Each piece costs 500 to 600 yen, which is about two or three times the price of bread at other bakeries.

On top of that, it’s dangerously delicious, the kind of bread that makes you crave more.

It may be made with healthy ingredients, but at the end of the day it is still bread, high in calories and heavy on the wallet.

I don’t really need it to live, yet once I buy one I immediately want to go back for another.

Moderation is hard when I can’t quite decide what “occasional” should mean.

For me, habits are easiest when I either do them every day or not at all.

If it’s something I only do occasionally, it’s better when I do it with someone else.

For example, I study English, work out, and clean my room daily.

Karate I practice once a week at the dojo, and cake is something I have only when I meet friends.

Keeping the rules simple makes them easier to follow.

Even so, I still can’t forget about that bakery.

I wonder how the lady who runs it is doing.

Maybe I should come up with a rule, like only stopping by when I happen to pass the shop on the way to the post office, so I can enjoy it without going overboard.

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Well done! The bread sounds amazing.

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plum_mei

Sept. 6, 2025

6

Thank you! Yes, they sell the most amazing blueberry bagel ever.

The owner bakes bread with great care, using carefully selected ingredients such as natural yeast and, organic nuts and berries.

Karate I practice karate once a week at the dojo, and cake is something I have onlyonly have when I meet with friends.

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Your English is absolutely incredible!!! Really well done, this is amazing :)

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plum_mei

Sept. 6, 2025

6

Thank you so much!

There’s a lovely bakery about a 10- minute bike ride from my house.

We do not need hyphens between a number and unit of measurement.

The owner bakes bread with great care, using carefully selected ingredients such as natural yeast and, organic nuts and berries.

It is not necessarily wrong to repeat "and" the way you did in your original sentence. However, in general writing, we will try to avoid it. Usually when it is used, it's to create specific literary effects.

Until a few months ago, I used to go there once a week to show my support.

However, I’ve started to feel that the bread is a bit too luxurious for a regular treat.

Each piece costs 500 to 600 yen, which is about two or three times the price of bread at other bakeries.

On top of that, it’s dangerously delicious, the kind of bread that makes you crave more.

It may be made with healthy ingredients, but at the end of the day it is still bread, high in calories and heavy on the wallet.

I don’t really need it to live, yet once I buy one I immediately want to go back for another.

Moderation is hard when I can’t quite decide what “occasional” should mean.

For me, habits are easiest when I either do them every day or not at all.

If it’s something I only do occasionally, it’s better when I do it with someone else.

For example, I study English, work out, and clean my room daily.

Karate I practice once a week at the dojo, and cake is something I have only when I meet friends.

Keeping the rules simple makes them easier to follow.

Even so, I still can’t forget about that bakery.

I wonder how the lady who runs it is doing.

Maybe I should come up with a rule, like only stopping by when I happen to pass the shop on the way to the post office, so I can enjoy it without going overboard.

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Very fluent writing.

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plum_mei

Sept. 5, 2025

6

Thank you!

Moderation Is Hard (適度は難しい)

There’s a lovely bakery that is about a 10-minute bike ride from my house.

The owner bakes bread with great care, using carefully selected ingredients such as natural yeast and organic nuts and berries.

Until a few months ago, I used to go there once a week to show my support.

However, I’ve started to feel that the bread is a bit too luxurious for a regular treat.

Each piece costs 500 to 600 yen, which is about two or three times the price of bread at other bakeries.

On top of that, it’s dangerously delicious, the kind of bread that makes you crave more.

It may be made with healthy ingredients, but at the end of the day it is still bread, high in calories and heavy on the wallet.

I don’t really need it to live, yet oncethe moment I buy one, I immediately want to go back for another.

Moderation is hard when I can’t quite decide what “occasional” should mean.

For me, habits are the easiest when I either do them every day or not at all.

If it’s something I only do occasionally, it’s better when I do it with someone else.

For example, I study English, work out, and clean my room daily.

Karate I practice karate once a week at the dojo, and cake is something I have only when I meet up with my friends.

Keeping the rules simple makes them easier to follow.

Even so, I still can’t forget about that bakery.

I wonder how the lady who runs it is doing.

Maybe I should come up with a rule, like only stopping by when I happen to pass the shop on the way to the post office, so that I can enjoy it without going overboard.

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plum_mei

Sept. 5, 2025

6

Thank you!

Moderation Is Hard 適度は難しい


Moderation Is Hard (適度は難しい)

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There’s a lovely bakery about a 10-minute bike ride from my house.


There’s a lovely bakery that is about a 10-minute bike ride from my house.

There’s a lovely bakery about a 10- minute bike ride from my house.

We do not need hyphens between a number and unit of measurement.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The owner bakes bread with great care, using carefully selected ingredients such as natural yeast and organic nuts and berries.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The owner bakes bread with great care, using carefully selected ingredients such as natural yeast and, organic nuts and berries.

It is not necessarily wrong to repeat "and" the way you did in your original sentence. However, in general writing, we will try to avoid it. Usually when it is used, it's to create specific literary effects.

The owner bakes bread with great care, using carefully selected ingredients such as natural yeast and, organic nuts and berries.

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Until a few months ago, I used to go there once a week to show my support.


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However, I’ve started to feel that the bread is a bit too luxurious for a regular treat.


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However, I’ve started to feel that the bread is a bit too luxurious forto be enjoyed as a regular treat. (or to be enjoyed regularly.)

Each piece costs 500 to 600 yen, which is about two or three times the price of bread at other bakeries.


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On top of that, it’s dangerously delicious, the kind of bread that makes you crave more.


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It may be made with healthy ingredients, but at the end of the day it is still bread, high in calories and heavy on the wallet.


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I don’t really need it to live, yet once I buy one I immediately want to go back for another.


I don’t really need it to live, yet oncethe moment I buy one, I immediately want to go back for another.

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Moderation is hard when I can’t quite decide what “occasional” should mean.


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For me, habits are easiest when I either do them every day or not at all.


For me, habits are the easiest when I either do them every day or not at all.

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If it’s something I only do occasionally, it’s better when I do it with someone else.


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For example, I study English, work out, and clean my room daily.


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Karate I practice once a week at the dojo, and cake is something I have only when I meet friends.


Karate I practice karate once a week at the dojo, and cake is something I have only when I meet up with my friends.

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Karate I practice karate once a week at the dojo, and cake is something I have onlyonly have when I meet with friends.

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Keeping the rules simple makes them easier to follow.


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Even so, I still can’t forget about that bakery.


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I wonder how the lady who runs it is doing.


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Maybe I should come up with a rule, like only stopping by when I happen to pass the shop on the way to the post office, so I can enjoy it without going overboard.


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Maybe I should come up with a rule, like only stopping by when I happen to pass the shop on the way to the post office, so that I can enjoy it without going overboard.

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