Sept. 22, 2021
Mock exam - writing
I have a language test in the next days. This is a mock exam. The first task is about to describe 2 different charts and the second was about to discuss about a given opinion.
Task 2: "In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility."
Task 1:
The bar chart gives information about the number of Japanese tourism outside of Japan between 1985 and 1995 and the graph below shows the relation in percentage of Japanese tourists travelling to Australia in the same years.
The share of Japanese people travelling abroad increases in general. While the number was by 5 million in 1985 it increased up to 15 million until 1995. Although the number increased in general over the years, it fluctuated at specific points. The share constantly rose until 1990, however, it decreased a little for the following year.
The graph has similar movements compared to the bar chart above. Even though the share of Japanese rose in general, it decreased from 5% to almost 4% in 1989 to 1990, and in contrast to the first chart, also a little from 1994 to 1995. While the slope was stronger in the first half, it is a little bit weaker in second half.
Task 2:
Should children work? While some call that completely wrong, others say collecting working expierience supports their mental growth. To provide an answer this essay will consider adavantages and disadvantages, and discus why children should not work.
If children work during their childhood they are able to collect worthful working expierience and learn to act responsible. Furthermore, they can learn to appreciate money. Indeed they develop a better feeling of the worth of money. For instance, not working children could compared to working children buy more sweets, toys or other things working peple could see as money waste in comparission for the needed working time.
In comparission to the supportive perspective others see that as a big mistake. Due to stay concentrated in school, they should not work in their free time. Even though they can collect working expierience, it is more important to let them meet or play with friends when they do not have to go to school. Improvements in their social skills with other children should not be underestimated. Additionally, the threat of falling behind in school increases if they work after it.
In conclusion, the advantages to work do not overweight the disadvantages for the explained reasons. The threat of losing the focus in school or a lack of developed social skills are to big, which is why children should not work during their childhood.
Mock exam - writing
I have a language test in the next days.
This is a mock exam.
The first task is about to describe 2 different charts and the second was aboutis to discuss about a given opinion.
Since you wrote "was", is this still a task in the test? Or was it a mistake?
Task 2: "In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work.
Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
The bar chart gives information about the number of Japanese tourism outside of Japan between 1985 and 1995 and the graph below shows the relation in percentage of Japanese tourists travelling to Australia in the same years.
The share of Japanese people travelling abroad increases in general.
While the number was by/around 5 million in 1985 it increased to up to 15 million until 1995.
Although the number increased in general over the years, it fluctuated at specific points.
The share constantly rose until 1990, however, it decreased a little forin the following year.
It sounds somewhat odd referring to the number as "the share", I'd write it "this amount":
This amount constantly rose until 1990, however, it decreased a little in the following year.
The graph has similar movements compared to the bar chart above.
Even though the shareamount of Japanese people traveling abroad rose in general, it decreased from 5% to almost 4% in 1989 to 1990, and in contrast to the first chart, also a little from 1994 to 1995.
While the slope was stronger in the first half, it is a little bit weaker in second half.
Task 2:
While some call that completely wrong, others say collecting working expierience supports their mental growth.
To provide an answer, this essay will consider adavantages and disadvantages, and discus why children should not work.
If children work during their childhood, they are able to collect worthful working expierience and learn to act responsible.
Furthermore, they can learn to appreciate money.
Indeed, they develop a better feeling ofor the worth of money.
For instance, not working children could, compared to working children buy more sweets, toys or other things working people could see as money waste in comparission for, given the needed working time.
In comparission to the supportive perspective, others see that as a big mistake.
Due to stay concentrated in school, they should not work in their free time.
Even though they can collect working expierience, it is more important to let them meet or play with friends when they do not have to go to school.
Improvements in their social skills with other children should not be underestimated.
Additionally, the threat of falling behind in school increases if they work after it.
In conclusion, the advantages tof work for children do not overweight the disadvantages for the explained reasons.
The threat of losing the focus in school or a lack of developed social skills are too big, which is why children should not work during their childhood.
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I have a language test in the next days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is a mock exam. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The first task is about to describe 2 different charts and the second was about to discuss about a given opinion. The first task is Since you wrote "was", is this still a task in the test? Or was it a mistake? |
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Task 2: "In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Task 1: |
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The bar chart gives information about the number of Japanese tourism outside of Japan between 1985 and 1995 and the graph below shows the relation in percentage of Japanese tourists travelling to Australia in the same years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The share of Japanese people travelling abroad increases in general. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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While the number was by 5 million in 1985 it increased up to 15 million until 1995. While the number was by/around 5 million in 1985 it increased to up to 15 million until 1995. |
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Although the number increased in general over the years, it fluctuated at specific points. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The share constantly rose until 1990, however, it decreased a little for the following year. The share constantly rose until 1990, however, it decreased a little It sounds somewhat odd referring to the number as "the share", I'd write it "this amount": This amount constantly rose until 1990, however, it decreased a little in the following year. |
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The graph has similar movements compared to the bar chart above. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even though the share of Japanese rose in general, it decreased from 5% to almost 4% in 1989 to 1990, and in contrast to the first chart, also a little from 1994 to 1995. Even though the |
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While the slope was stronger in the first half, it is a little bit weaker in second half. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Task 2: This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Should children work? |
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While some call that completely wrong, others say collecting working expierience supports their mental growth. While some call that completely wrong, others say collecting working exp |
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To provide an answer this essay will consider adavantages and disadvantages, and discus why children should not work. To provide an answer, this essay will consider ad |
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If children work during their childhood they are able to collect worthful working expierience and learn to act responsible. If children work during their childhood, they are able to collect worthful working exp |
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Furthermore, they can learn to appreciate money. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Indeed they develop a better feeling of the worth of money. Indeed, they develop a better feeling |
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For instance, not working children could compared to working children buy more sweets, toys or other things working peple could see as money waste in comparission for the needed working time. For instance, not working children could, compared to working children buy more sweets, toys or other things working people could see as money waste |
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In comparission to the supportive perspective others see that as a big mistake. In comparis |
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Due to stay concentrated in school, they should not work in their free time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even though they can collect working expierience, it is more important to let them meet or play with friends when they do not have to go to school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Improvements in their social skills with other children should not be underestimated. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Additionally, the threat of falling behind in school increases if they work after it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In conclusion, the advantages to work do not overweight the disadvantages for the explained reasons. In conclusion, the advantages |
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The threat of losing the focus in school or a lack of developed social skills are to big, which is why children should not work during their childhood. The threat of losing the focus in school or a lack of developed social skills are too big, which is why children should not work during their childhood. |
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