June 12, 2026
Now, I'm undergoing orthodontic treatment.
In Japan, treatment covered by public health insurance is cheap.
However, cosmetic treatments such as orthodontics and teeth whitening are not covered, so they are very expensive.
In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments their patients.
At least until 2020, many Japanese people saw orthodontic treatments as a luxury that only rich people and celebrities could afford.
However, during the pandemic, remote work and study became common, and wearing musk even when they are not sick also became widespread. As a result, people could undergo orthodontic treatment without others noticing, and orthodontics quickly became more popular in Japan.
*Many Japanese people feel that faces with braces look unattractive.
I had my first consultation in April this year.
I still have separators between my teeth.
I'll have my teeth extracted this month and get braces next month.
It'll take a long time to get well-aligned teeth.
私は今、歯列矯正を受けています。
日本では、保険適用治療であれば安価です。
しかし、歯列矯正やホワイトニングのような審美目的の治療は自費診療となり、非常に高額です。
そのため、歯医者は患者に対して積極的にそれらの治療を勧めません。
少なくとも2020年以前までは、日本では歯列矯正は芸能人や裕福な人が行う贅沢品というイメージでした。
しかし、コロナ禍で在宅時間が増えたことや花粉症や風邪をひいている時以外でもマスクの着用が一般的になったことから、"他人に矯正装置を見られずに矯正できる"ようになり、急速に歯列矯正が普及しました。
*日本では、矯正装置を付けている姿は不格好だと認識されています。
私も今年の4月に初診を受けました。
まだセパレーターを歯に入れている段階です。
今月中に抜歯、来月に矯正装置を嵌める計画ですが、道のりはまだまだ長いです。
Now, I'mI'm currently undergoing orthodontic treatment.
I'm currently undergoing orthodontic treatment.
"Now," at the start of the sentence sounds kind of dramatic, like you're shifting the title. Since this sentence modifying usage of "now" has a lot more nuance than just saying the time, it's better to use something else, like "now" at the end of a sentence instead or the adverb "currently".
However, during the pandemic, remote work and study became common, and wearing muasks even when theypeople are not sick also became widespread.
However, during the pandemic, remote work and study became common, and wearing masks even when people are not sick also became widespread.
"they" is ambiguous between whether it refers to "Japanese people" or "remote work and study" or "masks", so it's better to repeat the noun to clarify.
*Many Japanese people feel that faces with braces look unattractive. *Many Japanese people feel that faces with braces look unattractive.
I think is opinion is pretty common here too.
Now, I'mI'm currently undergoing orthodontic treatment.
I'm currently undergoing orthodontic treatment.
In Japan, treatments covered by public health insurance isare cheap.
In Japan, treatments covered by public health insurance are cheap.
In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients because of this. In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients because of this.
However, during the pandemic, remote work and study became common, and wearing mua mask even when they are not sick also became widespread.
However, during the pandemic, remote work and study became common, and wearing a mask even when not sick also became widespread.
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大した問題はありませんが、もうちょっと自然な英語に直しました。頑張ってください。
ちなみに、アメリカでは最近透明なプラスチックでできていて、ほとんど見えないブレースの方が流行っているけどまだ日本では流行っていませんか?
Orthodontic Treatment
Now, I'm undergoing orthodontic treatment.
In Japan, treatments covered by public health insurance is cheap. In Japan, treatments covered by public health insurance is cheap.
However, cosmetic treatments such as orthodontics and teeth whitening are not covered, so they are very expensive.
In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients. In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients.
At least until 2020, many Japanese people saw orthodontic treatments as a luxury that only rich people and celebrities could afford.
However, during the pandemic, remote work and study became common, and wearing muasks even when they are not sick also became widespread.
However, during the pandemic, remote work and study became common, and wearing masks even when they are not sick also became widespread.
As a result, people could undergo orthodontic treatment without others noticing, and orthodontics quickly became more popular in Japan.
*Many Japanese people feel that faces with braces look unattractive.
I had my first consultation in April this year.
I still have separators between my teeth.
I'll have my teeth extracted this month and get braces next month.
It'll take a long time to get well-aligned teeth.
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So in-depth! Thank you for your writing, and hope your teeth look amazing soon!
Orthodontic Treatment
Now, I'm undergoing orthodontic treatment.
In Japan, treatment covered by public health insurance is cheap.
However, cosmetic treatments such as orthodontics and teeth whitening are not covered, so they are very expensive.
In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients. In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients.
At least until 2020, many Japanese people saw orthodontic treatments as a luxury that only rich people and celebrities could afford.
However, during the pandemic, remote work and studying became more common, and wearing muasks even when they areone is not sick also became more widespread.
However, during the pandemic, remote work and studying became more common, and wearing masks even when one is not sick became more widespread.
I don't think your grammar is wrong, I just tried to make it a bit more natural sounding for me.
As a result, people could undergo orthodontic treatment without others noticing, and orthodontics quickly became more popular in Japan.
*Many Japanese people feel that faces with braces look unattractive.
I had my first consultation in April of this year. I had my first consultation in April of this year.
I still have separators between my teeth.
I'll have my teeth extracted this month and get braces next month.
It'll take a long time to get well-aligned teeth.
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Wow! I didn't know this! I feel like I have seen more and more students get braces, more than I would have expected since my image of Japan was that people usually did not get braces. I did not know that these were some of the reasons. I also didn't know that it was because of the pandemic that has helped propel the surge of braces in Japan! Thanks for the info! Good luck with the braces, I had mine for 5 years, all junior high school and 2 years of high school haha.
And nice writing too!
Orthodontic Treatment
Now, I'm undergoing orthodontic treatment right now.
I'm undergoing orthodontic treatment right now.
In Japan, treatment covered by public health insurance is cheap.
However, cosmetic treatments such as orthodontics and teeth whitening are not covered, so they are very expensive.
In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients. In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients.
AUntil at least until 2020, many Japanese people saw orthodontic treatments as a luxury that only rich people and celebrities could afford.
Until at least 2020, many Japanese people saw orthodontic treatments as a luxury that only rich people and celebrities could afford.
However, during the pandemic, remote work and study became common, and wearing muasks even when they are not sick also became a widespread habit.
However, during the pandemic, remote work and study became common, and wearing masks even when not sick also became a widespread habit.
As a result, people could undergo orthodontic treatment without others noticing, and orthodontics quickly became more popular in Japan.
*Many Japanese people feel that faces with braces look unattractive.
Many Japanese people feel that faces with braces look unattractive.
I had my first consultation in April of this year. I had my first consultation in April of this year.
I still have separators between my teeth.
I'll have my teeth extracted this month and get braces the next month.
I'll have my teeth extracted this month and get braces the next.
It'll take a long time to get well-aligned teeth.
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Oof, good luck with your orthodontics treatment. I had braces in high-school, it hurt a lot.
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In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments their patients. In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients. In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients. In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients. In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients. In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients. In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients. In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients because of this. In fact, many dentists don't actively recommend these treatments to their patients because of this. |
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However, during the pandemic, remote work and study became common, and wearing musk even when they are not sick also became widespread.
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However, during the pandemic, remote work and studying became more common, and wearing m I don't think your grammar is wrong, I just tried to make it a bit more natural sounding for me.
However, during the pandemic, remote work and study became common, and wearing m
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However, during the pandemic, remote work and study became common, and wearing m "they" is ambiguous between whether it refers to "Japanese people" or "remote work and study" or "masks", so it's better to repeat the noun to clarify. |
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