It'This is my second journal which I'm writing here, but I've now I decided that I willo number my journals so I recognize this as first journal.

Your sentence is good, but this is more natural.

On theTo beginning, I would like to thanks for everyone who give mes their own time whichto read this journal and wantare willing to correct me if I make mistakes.

Just now I finished washing windows in my flat and I was about to hang the curtains.

Today is my first spare dayday off from work because our company haves a free week because of Christmas.

I'm glad that tomorrow is Christmas time because I like this period of timetime of the year.

But I'm a little upset because I really didcan't remember a Christmas day without snow on the outside.

The meaning of your original sentence is a little unclear, but this is what I think you meant.

Actually here is 8 degree so as onthis December is a little too hot in my opinion.

Tomorrow I will spent my time with my parents, my brother and my wife.

She cook very tastywell.

It'This is my second journal which I'm writing here, but now II have decided that I will number my journal so I now recognize this as my first journal entry.

On theTo beginning, I would like to thanks for everyone who give me own time whichtakes the time to read this journal and want correct me if I make mistakes.

JI just I finished washing windows in my flat and I was about to hang the curtains.

Today is my first spare day fromday off work because our company have free weeks a week of holidays because of Christmas.

I'm glad that tomorrow is Christmas time because I like this period of time.

But I'm a little upset because I really didcan't remember a Christmas day with snow on the outside.

I think you mean to say you are sad because there is no snow outside for Christmas. If that is the case, then it makes more sense to say "can't" which means cannot (as in you are not able to remember a time) instead of "didn't" or "did not".

Actually, here it is 8 degree so as os which, in December, is a little too hot in my opinion.

Tomorrow I will spent my time with my parents, my brother and my wife.

Or, you could say "My parents, brother and wife".

I can't wait because usually my mom makes foods and I really like my mom's fcoodking, it is very tasty.

She cook very tasty.

It's my second journal entry which I'm writing here, but now I've decided that I will number my journal so I recognize this as first journalentries so this one is my first.

On the beginningFirst, I would like to thanks for everyone who give me own time whichspends time reading this journal and wantentry and correcting me if I make mistakes.

JI just I finished washing windows in my flat and I was about to hang the curtains.

Today is my first spare dayday off from work because our company haves a free week because offor Christmas.

I'm glad that tomorrow is Christmas time because I like this period of timetime of year.

But I'm a little upset, however, because I don't really didn't remember Christmas day with snow on the outside.

Actually here, it is 8 degree so as on December is a little too hots here so it is a little too warm for December in my opinion.

Tomorrow I will spent myd time with my parents, brother and my wifewife and brother.

I can't wait because usually my mom makes foods and I really like my mom's food.

Food is an uncountable noun so the plural of food is food.

She cookHer food is very tasty.

or

She cooks very delicious food.

Goodbye.