Jan. 31, 2021
January 31
My friend said he wants to become a school teacher in the future. I don’t have my dream for the future yet, so I hope I can find one. I think I would be a businessman.
友達が学校の先生になりたいと言っていた。自分はまだ将来の夢が無いので、いずれ見つかるといいな。普通のビジネスマンでもいいかな。
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January 31
My friend said he wants to become a school teacher in the future.
My friend said he wants to become a schoolteacher in the future.
“Schoolteacher” should be one word.
I don’t have my dream for the future yet, so I hope I can find one.
I think I would be a businessman.
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Just adding a comment about spelling, since I see that it hasn’t been addressed yet.
Feb. 1, 2021
Thank you for correcting!
January 31
My friend said he wants to become a school teacher in the future.
My friend said he wants to become a school teacher.
I don’t have mya dream for the future yet, so I hope I can find one.
I don’t have a dream for the future yet, so I hope I can find one.
I think I wouldill be a businessman.
I think I will be a businessman.
Feb. 1, 2021
Thank you for correcting!
January 31
My friend said he wants to become a school teacher in the future.
My friend said he wants to become a school teacher.
We don't really add "in the future" when we use "wants to become." "Wants to become" already tells us that it's in the future.
I don’t have my dream for the future yet, so I hope I can find one.
I think I would be a businessman.
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Great job! Finding one's dream isn't always easy so I totally understand. They say to try to do what you like to do. 頑張ってくださいね。
Feb. 1, 2021
Thank you for correcting!
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My friend said he wants to become a school teacher in the future.
My friend said he wants to become a school teacher We don't really add "in the future" when we use "wants to become." "Wants to become" already tells us that it's in the future.
My friend said he wants to become a school teacher
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I don’t have my dream for the future yet, so I hope I can find one. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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