Sept. 13, 2023
Miracle Event
My summer vacation started. This time, I’m going to enjoy traveling to Asian countries.
It’s a weekday today, but an airport was crowded. After waiting for a long time, I checked in and went through the embarkation procedure.
I hadn’t eaten breakfast yet, so I was looking for Cafe.
At that time, I ran into my friends from college. When I talked to them, they were really surprised because I hadn’t seen them since we graduated.
Sadly, My departure time didn’t let us chat enough. We wished us good luck each other, and headed to each destinations.
It’s a weekday today, but anthe airport was crowded.
Sadly, My departure time didn’t let us chat enoughafford us enough time to chat.
We wished us good luck each other good luck, and headed to eachour destinations.
Miracle Event
My summer vacation has started.
Perfect tense. Happened in the past but connected to the present.
This time, I’m going to enjoy traveling to Asian countries.
It’s a weekday today, but anthe airport was crowded.
It is a specific airport so "the"
After waiting for a long time, I checked in and went through the embarkation procedure.
I hadn’t eaten breakfast yet, so I was looking for Cafe.
At that time, I ran into my friends from college.
When I talked to them, they were really surprised because I hadn’t seen them since we graduated.
Sadly, M my departure time didn’t let us chat enough.
Would say Sadly is part of the meaning of the sentence so no comma. Lower case m in my.
We wished us good luck each other good luck, and headed to eachoff to our destinations.
Feedback
Very good work. Mostly correct.
It’s a weekday today, but anthe airport was crowded.
After waiting for a long time, I checked in and went through the embarkationboarding procedure.
Embarkation is correct but boarding sounds more natural.
I hadn’t eaten breakfast yet, so I was looking for Ca cafe.
The story seems a little out of order. If you have gone through the boarding/embarking you are on the plane and cannot be looking for a cafe.
At that time, I ran into mysome friends from college.
Sadly, Mmy departure time didn’t let us chat enough.
We wished useach other good luck each other, and headed to eachour destinations.
You can also say "to each of our respective destinations."
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It’s a weekday today, but an airport was crowded. It’s a weekday today, but It’s a weekday today, but It is a specific airport so "the" It’s a weekday today, but |
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Miracle Event This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My summer vacation started. My summer vacation has started. Perfect tense. Happened in the past but connected to the present. |
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This time, I’m going to enjoy traveling to Asian countries. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After waiting for a long time, I checked in and went through the embarkation procedure. After waiting for a long time, I checked in and went through the Embarkation is correct but boarding sounds more natural. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hadn’t eaten breakfast yet, so I was looking for Cafe. I hadn’t eaten breakfast yet, so I was looking for The story seems a little out of order. If you have gone through the boarding/embarking you are on the plane and cannot be looking for a cafe. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At that time, I ran into my friends from college. At that time, I ran into This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I talked to them, they were really surprised because I hadn’t seen them since we graduated. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Sadly, My departure time didn’t let us chat enough. Sadly, Sadly Would say Sadly is part of the meaning of the sentence so no comma. Lower case m in my. Sadly, My departure time didn’t |
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We wished us good luck each other, and headed to each destinations. We wished You can also say "to each of our respective destinations." We wished We wished |
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