Jan. 8, 2021
Minimalism
Minimalism is something that I've been drawn to for months now. I like the idea of living with less. However, I can't get rid of things because I live with my family and I will continue to do so for several years while I study and get I job. Fortunately, I can still choose what to do with my belongings, but it's still hard.
I think the most problematic area is my closet. I have lots of clothes. Most of them I don't even like. Half of it once belonged to my sister. I don't really like buying clothes, so much of what I have has been gifted to me. I don't like it when someone gives me clothes, specially if I can't go to the store and change it for something that I like better. I'm very picky when buying and I don't like having things I don't like and I know I will never wear.
When I declutter my closet and decide to donate a part of my clothes, my family thinks I'll be left with no clothes and that we'll need to go shopping. I would really like to start over with my closet and only buy items that I'll definitely wear, but that's not possible.
Minimalism
Minimalism is something that I've been drawn to for months now.
I like the idea of living with less.
However, I can't get rid of things because I live with my family, and I will continue to do so for several more years while I study and get Ia job.
Another way to phrase the last part would be, “I will continue to do so until I finish studying and get a job”.
Fortunately, I can still choose what to do with my belongings, but it's still hard.
I think the most problematic area is my closet.
Most of them I don't even like.
Half of ithem once belonged to my sister.
I don't really like buying clothes, so much of what I have has been gifted to me.
I don't like it when someone gives me clothes, especially if I can't go to the store and change ithem in for something else that I like better.
“ ‘specially” is a shortened form of “especially” used in speech in some English dialects, although it’s not grammatically correct in writing.
I'm very picky when buying things, and I don't like having things that I don't like and I know I will never wear.
“I will” is often written/said as “I’ll”.
Instead of saying “buying things”, you could also just say “shopping”.
When I declutter my closet and decide to donate a partselection of my clothes, my family thinks I'll be left with no clotheswill think that I don’t have any left and that we'll need to go shopping.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
Jan. 9, 2021
Thanks!
Minimalism
Minimalism is something that I've been drawn to for months now.
I like the idea of living with less.
However, I can't get rid of things because I live with my family and I[I] will continue to do so for several years while I study and get Ia job.
The "I" in brackets can be omitted.
Fortunately, I can still choose what to do with my belongings, but it's still hard.
I think the most problematic area is my closet.
I have lots of clothes.
Most of them I don't even like.
Half of ithem once belonged to my sister.
I don't really like buying clothes, so much of what I have has been gifted to me.
I don't like it when someone gives me clothes, [e]specially if I can't go to the store and change it for something that I like better.
In US English, we'd say "especially" in this context. I'm not sure about other versions of English.
I'm very picky when buying and I don't like having things I don't like and I[I] know I will never wear.
The "I" in brackets is optional.
WMy family thinks that when I declutter my closet and decide to donate a partsome of my clothes, my family thinks I'll be left with no clothes and thatne and we'll need to go shopping.
I would really like to start over with my closet and only buy items that I'll definitely wear, but that's not possible.
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Your English is extremely good.
Jan. 8, 2021
Thank you so much!
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However, I can't get rid of things because I live with my family and I will continue to do so for several years while I study and get I job. However, I can't get rid of things because I live with my family and The "I" in brackets can be omitted. However, I can't get rid of things because I live with my family, and I will continue to do so for several more years while I study and get Another way to phrase the last part would be, “I will continue to do so until I finish studying and get a job”. |
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Fortunately, I can still choose what to do with my belongings, but it's still hard. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think the most problematic area is my closet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have lots of clothes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Most of them I don't even like. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't really like buying clothes, so much of what I have has been gifted to me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't like it when someone gives me clothes, specially if I can't go to the store and change it for something that I like better. I don't like it when someone gives me clothes, [e]specially if I can't go to the store and change it for something that I like better. In US English, we'd say "especially" in this context. I'm not sure about other versions of English. I don't like it when someone gives me clothes, especially if I can't go to the store and change “ ‘specially” is a shortened form of “especially” used in speech in some English dialects, although it’s not grammatically correct in writing. |
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I'm very picky when buying and I don't like having things I don't like and I know I will never wear. I'm very picky when buying and I don't like having things I don't like and The "I" in brackets is optional. I'm very picky when buying things, and I don't like having things that I don't like and I know I will never wear. “I will” is often written/said as “I’ll”. Instead of saying “buying things”, you could also just say “shopping”. |
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When I declutter my closet and decide to donate a part of my clothes, my family thinks I'll be left with no clothes and that we'll need to go shopping.
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I would really like to start over with my closet and only buy items that I'll definitely wear, but that's not possible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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