Sept. 24, 2020
The first cup of milky tea this autumn, lol!
There is no need for someone to buy it for me and I will never buy it for anyone. We can buy everything like this for ourselves. Yes, you can buy everything for yourself. This is a kind of mightiness and autonomy. Please don't be fooled by the milky tea store haha. But anyway, salute your youth, salute your romance and hope you guys all can get your own milky tea this fall.
The first cup of milky tea this autumn, lol!
To be grammatically correct, this needs a verb. However, this is acceptable in spoken English and most native speakers would say phrases like this. I do it all the time.
We can buy everanything like this for ourselves.
Yes, you can buy everanything for yourself.
Everything sounds fine, anything makes more sense.
But anyway, salute your youth, salute your romance and hope you guys all can get your own milky tea this fall.
English does not have a second person plural and I think this is why you wrote "you guys all". I would say in spoken English: I hope you guys can all get your own milky tea. If you're not sure, leave out "all".
Fun note: if you hear people from the (US) South talk, they would say: I hope y'all can get your own milky tea. Or y'all's own milky tea. Or even better: I hope all y'all can get y'all's own milky tea. Wow.
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The tea store wants you to buy more than one tea. That's why they market love/friendship. Greedy tea store. Great work, this sounded natural when I read it.
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The first cup of milky tea of autumn, lol! |
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There is no need for someone to buy it for me and I will never buy it for anyone. |
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We can buy everything like this for ourselves. We can buy |
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Yes, you can buy everything for yourself. Yes, you can buy Everything sounds fine, anything makes more sense. |
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This is a kind of mightiness and autonomy. |
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Please don't be fooled by the milky tea store haha. |
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But anyway, salute your youth, salute your romance and hope you guys all can get your own milky tea this fall. But anyway, salute your youth, salute your romance and hope you guys English does not have a second person plural and I think this is why you wrote "you guys all". I would say in spoken English: I hope you guys can all get your own milky tea. If you're not sure, leave out "all". Fun note: if you hear people from the (US) South talk, they would say: I hope y'all can get your own milky tea. Or y'all's own milky tea. Or even better: I hope all y'all can get y'all's own milky tea. Wow. |
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The first cup of milky tea this autumn, lol! The first cup of milky tea this autumn, lol! To be grammatically correct, this needs a verb. However, this is acceptable in spoken English and most native speakers would say phrases like this. I do it all the time. |
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