Sept. 30, 2020
Middle autumn festival
Tomorrow is a traditional Chinese holiday called the "Middle Autumn Festival". One of the traditional customs is eating moon cakes. The moon cakes are a kind of food which is made of food oil, flour, rock sugar and various kernels. It looks like a small pizza. Although there are few people who like eating them because their cloying tasty, moon cake still exists and will never be absent when the holiday comes. It has already become a signal for the middle autumn festival. It represents a kind of respect and auspiciousness. Like most people, I don't like eating moon cake either, but every middle autumn festival comes, I will buy some and taste a little. A few days ago, my older brother sent me two boxes of vegan moon cakes which were made in Shanghai gongdelin food company and I tasted some. It's not bad. A great ancient Chinese poet Libai once wrote a poem. He said, "I hope people can have longevity and enjoy the light and peaceful moonlight together in the middle autumn festival night from a distance in the world. Now I also send these beautiful wishes to you guys all, happy middle autumn festival and stay safe and healthy.
Middle aAutumn festival
The English translation of this holiday does not use "Middle". Just "Autumn Festival" is enough.
Tomorrow is a traditional Chinese holiday called the "Middle Autumn Festival".
One of the traditional customs is to eating moon cakes., which
You do not have to repeat the word traditional, since it was already established that this is a traditional holiday.
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I combined your last two sentences to make them flow better. Also, I do not understand what you mean by kernels. Usually kernels are associated with corn, but I'm not sure if moon cakes are made out of corn kernels.
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Like most people, I also don't like eating moon cake either, but every middle autumn festival comes, I will buy some and tastes, but I will still buy them to a little taste.
A few days ago, I tasted some vegan moon cakes from my older brother. He sent me two boxes of vegan moon cakes which were made inthem from the Shanghai gGongdelin food company and I tasted some.
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A great ancient Chinese poet Libai once wrote a poem.
He said, "I hope people canwill have longevity and enjoy the light and peaceful moonlight together in the middle autumn festival night from a distance in the world.
It is difficult to translate Li Bai's poem, because I think you might have taken an excerpt from a longer poem or combined a line from two different poems. I think he said that his one wish for you is long life, and that he wanted to share this loveliness from far, far away. I could be wrong, as it has been many years since I read his poems.
Now I also send these beautiful wishes to you guys all, happy middleall of you. Have a happy autumn festival and stay safe and healthy.
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Very nice wishes from you.
Oct. 1, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and explanations.
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It's not bad.
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Middle autumn festival
The English translation of this holiday does not use "Middle". Just "Autumn Festival" is enough. |
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Tomorrow is a traditional Chinese holiday called the "Middle Autumn Festival". Tomorrow is a traditional Chinese holiday called the " |
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One of the traditional customs is eating moon cakes. One of the You do not have to repeat the word traditional, since it was already established that this is a traditional holiday. |
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The moon cakes are a kind of food which is made of food oil, flour, rock sugar and various kernels.
I combined your last two sentences to make them flow better. Also, I do not understand what you mean by kernels. Usually kernels are associated with corn, but I'm not sure if moon cakes are made out of corn kernels. |
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It looks like a small pizza.
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Although there are few people who like eating them because their cloying tasty, moon cake still exists and will never be absent when the holiday comes. Although there are few people who like |
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It has already become a signal for the middle autumn festival.
I combined the last two sentences. |
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It represents a kind of respect and auspiciousness.
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Like most people, I don't like eating moon cake either, but every middle autumn festival comes, I will buy some and taste a little. Like most people, I also don't like |
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A few days ago, my older brother sent me two boxes of vegan moon cakes which were made in Shanghai gongdelin food company and I tasted some. A few days ago, I tasted some vegan moon cakes from my older brother. He sent me two boxes of |
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A great ancient Chinese poet Libai once wrote a poem. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He said, "I hope people can have longevity and enjoy the light and peaceful moonlight together in the middle autumn festival night from a distance in the world. He said, "I hope people It is difficult to translate Li Bai's poem, because I think you might have taken an excerpt from a longer poem or combined a line from two different poems. I think he said that his one wish for you is long life, and that he wanted to share this loveliness from far, far away. I could be wrong, as it has been many years since I read his poems. |
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Now I also send these beautiful wishes to you guys all, happy middle autumn festival and stay safe and healthy. Now I also send these beautiful wishes to |
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