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hiratecs

Nov. 25, 2024

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I'm considering buying a microphone, so I can practice online conversations on Discord starting in December. My current headphone is falling apart; the foams is fraying and the painting are literally turning into dust and sticking all over my head. That's why I don't use it anymore. Instead, I use cheaper earbuds that I bought on Aliexpress (before they started charging abusive fees). Searching up on Reddit, I found a mic with a really impressive quality, and I might afford it as well. But I think I'll wait until Black Friday is out so I can get some discounts on it. It isn't an essencial investment to my life since the only purpose of purchasing it is online talking, but I think It would be nice to gift myself as an end-of-year present.

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I'm considering buying a microphone, so I can practice online conversations on Discord starting in December.

My current headphone iss are falling apart; the foams is fraying and the painting are is literally turning into dust and sticking all over my head.

Some issues with plurals vs singular here. Unforunately when using "to be" it sticks out more clearly as the verb changes in conjugation, depending on the amount of things it is affecting. Headphones are always plural, just like the word "trousers" and in this case both 'foam' and 'paint' are uncountable nouns.

That's why I don't use ithem anymore.

Plural again, because it is the headphones.

Instead, I use some cheaper earbuds that I bought on Aliexpress (before they started charging abusive fees).

I would opt to add "some" here to add clarity to the sentence. It isn't necessarily wrong not to use it, but it reads more fluidly for me this way.

SWhile searching up on Reddit, I found a mic with a really impressive quality, and I might be able to afford it as well.

Searching doesn't always need up and here it wasn't necessary. "To search something up", is to look for it in a dictionary or a book.
For the "might be able to" part - you must indicate an ability to do or not do something after might. This is done using "I might be able + to [verb]".

But I think I'll wait until Black Friday is out so I can get some discounts on it.

It isn't an essenctial investment tofor my life since the only purpose of purchasing it is onlinefor talking online, but I think It would be nice to gift it to myself as an end-of-year present.

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Not bad, some minor errors but overall as a native English speaker and English teacher it was clear and understandable.

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hiratecs

Nov. 26, 2024

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Thank you! I'll pay more attention to using those plurals.

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Microphone

I'm considering buying a microphone, so I can practice online conversations on Discord starting in December.

My current headphone iss are falling apart; the foams is fraying and the painting are is literally turning into dust and sticking all over my head.

Esse imagem é tão engraçada kkkkk

That's why I don't use it anymore.

Instead, I use cheaper earbuds that I bought on Aliexpress (before they started charging abusive fees).

Searching up on Reddit, I found a mic with a really impressive quality, and I might be able to afford it as well.

But I think I'll wait until Black Friday is out so I can get some discounts on it.

It isn't an essenctial investment to my life since the only purpose of purchasing it is online talking, but I think Iit would be nice to gift myself as an end-of-year present.

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Perfeito!

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hiratecs

Nov. 26, 2024

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Valeu!

Microphone

I'm considering buying a microphone, so I can practice online conversations on Discord starting in December.

My current headphone iss are falling apart; the foams is fraying and the painting are literally turning into dust and sticking out all over my head.

headphones - plural - as you have two ears. As plural needs 'are'. Foam is uncountable no plural form. The word is not 'painting' but not sure exactly what you did mean. If it were 'painting' it would be 'is literally'.

That's why I don't use ithem anymore.

'them' as headphones is plural.

Instead, I use cheaper earbuds that I bought on Aliexpress (before they started charging abusive fees).

Searching up on Reddit, I found a mic with a really impressive quality, and that I might afford it as wellbe able to afford.

But I think I'll wait until Black Friday is outstarts so I can get some discounts on it.

It isn't an essenctial investment to my lifetem, since the only purpose of purchasing it is online talktalking onlinge, but I think Iit would be a nice to gift myself as an end-of-year present to myself.

Changed the end of the sentence as it sounded a bit repetitive with gift and present.

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Good work.

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I'm considering buying a microphone, so I can practice online conversations on Discord starting in December.


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My current headphone is falling apart; the foams is fraying and the painting are literally turning into dust and sticking all over my head.


My current headphone iss are falling apart; the foams is fraying and the painting are literally turning into dust and sticking out all over my head.

headphones - plural - as you have two ears. As plural needs 'are'. Foam is uncountable no plural form. The word is not 'painting' but not sure exactly what you did mean. If it were 'painting' it would be 'is literally'.

My current headphone iss are falling apart; the foams is fraying and the painting are is literally turning into dust and sticking all over my head.

Esse imagem é tão engraçada kkkkk

My current headphone iss are falling apart; the foams is fraying and the painting are is literally turning into dust and sticking all over my head.

Some issues with plurals vs singular here. Unforunately when using "to be" it sticks out more clearly as the verb changes in conjugation, depending on the amount of things it is affecting. Headphones are always plural, just like the word "trousers" and in this case both 'foam' and 'paint' are uncountable nouns.

That's why I don't use it anymore.


That's why I don't use ithem anymore.

'them' as headphones is plural.

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That's why I don't use ithem anymore.

Plural again, because it is the headphones.

Instead, I use cheaper earbuds that I bought on Aliexpress (before they started charging abusive fees).


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Instead, I use some cheaper earbuds that I bought on Aliexpress (before they started charging abusive fees).

I would opt to add "some" here to add clarity to the sentence. It isn't necessarily wrong not to use it, but it reads more fluidly for me this way.

Searching up on Reddit, I found a mic with a really impressive quality, and I might afford it as well.


Searching up on Reddit, I found a mic with a really impressive quality, and that I might afford it as wellbe able to afford.

Searching up on Reddit, I found a mic with a really impressive quality, and I might be able to afford it as well.

SWhile searching up on Reddit, I found a mic with a really impressive quality, and I might be able to afford it as well.

Searching doesn't always need up and here it wasn't necessary. "To search something up", is to look for it in a dictionary or a book. For the "might be able to" part - you must indicate an ability to do or not do something after might. This is done using "I might be able + to [verb]".

But I think I'll wait until Black Friday is out so I can get some discounts on it.


But I think I'll wait until Black Friday is outstarts so I can get some discounts on it.

But I think I'll wait until Black Friday is out so I can get some discounts on it.

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It isn't an essencial investment to my life since the only purpose of purchasing it is online talking, but I think It would be nice to gift myself as an end-of-year present.


It isn't an essenctial investment to my lifetem, since the only purpose of purchasing it is online talktalking onlinge, but I think Iit would be a nice to gift myself as an end-of-year present to myself.

Changed the end of the sentence as it sounded a bit repetitive with gift and present.

It isn't an essenctial investment to my life since the only purpose of purchasing it is online talking, but I think Iit would be nice to gift myself as an end-of-year present.

It isn't an essenctial investment tofor my life since the only purpose of purchasing it is onlinefor talking online, but I think It would be nice to gift it to myself as an end-of-year present.

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