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xiangying

Oct. 27, 2021

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Mice

There are some mice went into the vent of my apartment. They bit something inside the wall all day and night. I suffered from the mice, and I can't sleep all the night. Today, landlord sent a worker to my apartment to solve this problem. The worker put some clamps to the vent, and spread peanut butter on the clamps to lure the mice. I look forward to good news coming from the vent tomorrow.

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Mice

There are some mice that went into the vent of my apartment.

They bitwere biting something inside the wall all day and night.

I suffered from the mice, and I caouldn't sleep all the night.

Today, the landlord sent a worker to my apartment to solve this problem.

The worker put some clammouse traps toin the vent, and spread peanut butter on the clamtraps to lure the mice.

I look forward to good news coming from the vent tomorrowabout the mice being gone.

This sounds unnatural to me "I look forward to good news coming from the vent tomorrow." This sounds like someone is coming out the vent to tell you the good news.

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"I look forward to good news coming from the vent tomorrow." We usually talk about who is causing the problem so that is why I said mice.

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xiangying

Oct. 27, 2021

1

Thank you.

Mice

There are some mice that went into the vent of my apartment.

They bitwere biting something inside the wall all day and night.

I suffered from the mice, and I caouldn't sleep all the night.

Today, the landlord sent a worker to my apartment to solve this problem.

The worker put some clamps tonear the vent, and spread peanut butter on the clamps to lure the mice.

I look forward to good news coming from the vent tomorrow.

xiangying's avatar
xiangying

Oct. 27, 2021

1

Thank you.

Mice


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There are some mice went into the vent of my apartment.


There are some mice that went into the vent of my apartment.

There are some mice that went into the vent of my apartment.

They bit something inside the wall all day and night.


They bitwere biting something inside the wall all day and night.

They bitwere biting something inside the wall all day and night.

I suffered from the mice, and I can't sleep all the night.


I suffered from the mice, and I caouldn't sleep all the night.

I suffered from the mice, and I caouldn't sleep all the night.

Today, landlord sent a worker to my apartment to solve this problem.


Today, the landlord sent a worker to my apartment to solve this problem.

Today, the landlord sent a worker to my apartment to solve this problem.

The worker put some clamps to the vent, and spread peanut butter on the clamps to lure the mice.


The worker put some clamps tonear the vent, and spread peanut butter on the clamps to lure the mice.

The worker put some clammouse traps toin the vent, and spread peanut butter on the clamtraps to lure the mice.

I look forward to good news coming from the vent tomorrow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I look forward to good news coming from the vent tomorrowabout the mice being gone.

This sounds unnatural to me "I look forward to good news coming from the vent tomorrow." This sounds like someone is coming out the vent to tell you the good news.

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