Feb. 13, 2025
MI RUTINA
Everyday I wake up, with a lot of effort, and I go to the bathroom to wash my face with really cold water. Then I do some yoga exercises to strech and I have breakfast with my husband. I usually have a piece of fruit such as a banana, a kiwi o a peach and a toast with peanut butter and jam. However my husband prefers to eat something salad as bacon of a boiled egg with a coffee. After that we make our bed, I brush my theeth and I get dressed. At this momento I look at my mobile for the first time in the day, since I don’t like to look at it just after I wake up. When I finish doing this I left home to go to work.
Everyday I wake up, with a lot of effort, and, it takes a lot of effort for me to wake up, so I go to the bathroom to wash my face with really cold water.
This sounds more natural... also - using 'so' makes it clear that you wash your face with cold water ·because· you struggle to wake up in the morning...
Then I do some yoga exercises to stretch and I have breakfast with my husband.
I usually have a piece of fruit such as a banana, a kiwi or a peach and asome toast with peanut butter and jam.
'toast' is uncountable, so you can have 'some toast' or 'a piece of toast' or '2 pieces of toast' etc.
However my husband prefers to eat something saladvoury such as bacon ofr a boiled egg with a coffee.
'Salad' means lettuce, tomato, cucumber etc. or you can have a fruit salad. But I think here you wanted to say 'savoury', which is the opposite of 'sweet'.
After that we make our bed, I brush my theeth and I get dressed.
At this momentOnly then do I look at my mobile for the first time in the day, since I don’t like to look at it just after I wake up.
'moment' has no 'o' at the end, otherwise the sentence you wrote makes sense but sounds a little clumsy - my correction above, to me sounds more natural.
When I finish doing this, I leftave home to go to work.
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Then I do some yoga exercises to stretch and, then I have breakfast with my husband.
It sounded like you ate breakfast whilst doing yoga.
I usually have a piece of fruit such as a banana, a kiwi o ar peach and a. I also have toast with peanut butter and jam.
Your having a piece, so the article isn't needed again. "A piece of a banana" doesn't feel natural. "A piece of banana" sounds better.
However my husband prefers to eat something saladuch as bacon ofr a boiled egg with a coffee.
I don't think you mean salad here?
After that we make our bed, I brush my theeth and I get myself dressed.
At this momento I look at my mobile for the first time in the day, since I don’t like to look at it just after I wake up.
When I finish doing this I leftave home to go to work.
The writing was in present tense, so 'left' in past tense felt odd.
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Feb. 14, 2025
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Everyday I wake up, with a lot of effort, and I go to the bathroom to wash my face with really cold water. Everyday This sounds more natural... also - using 'so' makes it clear that you wash your face with cold water ·because· you struggle to wake up in the morning... |
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Then I do some yoga exercises to strech and I have breakfast with my husband. Then I do some yoga exercises to stretch It sounded like you ate breakfast whilst doing yoga. Then I do some yoga exercises to stretch and I have breakfast with my husband. |
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I usually have a piece of fruit such as a banana, a kiwi o a peach and a toast with peanut butter and jam. I usually have a piece of fruit such as Your having a piece, so the article isn't needed again. "A piece of a banana" doesn't feel natural. "A piece of banana" sounds better. I usually have a piece of fruit such as a banana, a kiwi or a peach and 'toast' is uncountable, so you can have 'some toast' or 'a piece of toast' or '2 pieces of toast' etc. |
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However my husband prefers to eat something salad as bacon of a boiled egg with a coffee. However my husband prefers to eat something s I don't think you mean salad here? However my husband prefers to eat something sa 'Salad' means lettuce, tomato, cucumber etc. or you can have a fruit salad. But I think here you wanted to say 'savoury', which is the opposite of 'sweet'. |
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After that we make our bed, I brush my theeth and I get dressed. After that we make our bed, I brush my t After that we make our bed, I brush my t |
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At this momento I look at my mobile for the first time in the day, since I don’t like to look at it just after I wake up. At this moment
'moment' has no 'o' at the end, otherwise the sentence you wrote makes sense but sounds a little clumsy - my correction above, to me sounds more natural. |
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When I finish doing this I left home to go to work. When I finish doing this I le The writing was in present tense, so 'left' in past tense felt odd. When I finish doing this, I le |
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