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galoarellano1987

Nov. 12, 2024

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My pretty wife

Tonight is a great moment for describe my wife. I think she's a worrier woman even when she is angry (jejeje).

I always remember the first time I saw her, She seemed to me a pretty woman, maybe her smile and eyes were the prettier smile and eyes I had ever seen.

Sometimes I think She could be better however She is how she is and she is perfect to me and my children. She is my best friend and I hope She continues to be like that.

I wish she always to be with my children and she could give them all the love.

Thanks for reading, and God bless you.

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Tonight is a great moment for me to describe my wife.

I think she's a worrier woman, even when she is angry (jejejehahaha).

I always remember the first time I saw her, Sshe seemed to me awas a very pretty woman, maybe her smile and eyes were the prettier smile and eyes I had ever seen.

"She had the prettiest eyes, and smile, I have ever seen", this makes for sense.

Sometimes I think Sshe could be better however S, she is how she is, and she is perfect to me and my children.

She is my best friend and I hope Sshe continues to be like that.

I wish she is always to be with my children, and she could give them all the love.

Thanks for reading, and God bless you.

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This was really good, however when using pronouns like she, and he, they should be in lowercase.

Tonight is a great moment forto describe my wife.

I think she's a worrier woman, even when she i's angry (jejejehahaha).

I'll always remember the first time I saw her,. She seemed to me avery pretty woman, maybe hto me. Her smile and eyes were maybe the prettier smile and eyest I had ever seen.

"pretty woman" can have a double meaning popculturally, because of the movie pretty woman with Julia Roberts. I don't know how common of a reference that is though.

Sometimes, I think Sshe could be better h. However S, she is how she is, and she is perfect to me and myour children.

Pronouns only need to be capitalized at the beginning of a sentence.

She is my best friend and I hope Sshe continues to be like that'll always be.

I wishhope she'll always to be with myour children and she could give them all ther love.

I wish she always - > original
I hope she will always - > corrected
I hope she'll always - > more natural

Using "wish" isn't wrong necessarily, but hope is clearer and more commonly used in this sort of context.

I changed "my children" to "our children" since you and your wife are in the same family, the kids belong to both of you.

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Nice work!

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Tonight is a great moment for describe my wife.

I think she's a worrier woman easily gets worried even when she is angry (jejeje).

I always remember the first time I saw her, She seemed to me alooked very pretty woman, maybe her smile and eyes were the prettierst smile and eyes I had ever seen.

Sometimes I think Sshe could be better, however Sshe is how she is and she is perfect to me and my children.

She shouldn't begin with the capital letter in the middle of a sentence because it is not a proper noun.

She is my best friend and I hope Sshe continues to be like thatis always my best friend.

I wish she will always to be with myour children and she could give them all the love.

Thanks for reading, and God bless you.

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A man with a good wife has found a good thing.

Tonight is a great moment forto describe my wife.

I think she's a woarrieor woman even when she is angry (jejeje).

I always remember the first time I saw her,. She seemed to me aso pretty woman, maybeto me. Maybe it was her smile and eyes. They were the prettierst smile and eyes I had ever seen.

Sometimes I think Sshe could be better h. However S, she is how she is, and she is perfect to me and my children.

She is my best friend, and I hope Sshe continues to be like that.

I wish she is always to be with my children, and she could give them all the love.

Mi pretty wife


Tonight is a great moment for describe my wife.


Tonight is a great moment forto describe my wife.

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Tonight is a great moment forto describe my wife.

Tonight is a great moment for me to describe my wife.

I think she's a worrier woman even when she is angry (jejeje).


I think she's a woarrieor woman even when she is angry (jejeje).

I think she's a worrier woman easily gets worried even when she is angry (jejeje).

I think she's a worrier woman, even when she i's angry (jejejehahaha).

I think she's a worrier woman, even when she is angry (jejejehahaha).

I always remember the first time I saw her, She seemed to me a pretty woman, maybe her smile and eyes were the prettier smile and eyes I had ever seen.


I always remember the first time I saw her,. She seemed to me aso pretty woman, maybeto me. Maybe it was her smile and eyes. They were the prettierst smile and eyes I had ever seen.

I always remember the first time I saw her, She seemed to me alooked very pretty woman, maybe her smile and eyes were the prettierst smile and eyes I had ever seen.

I'll always remember the first time I saw her,. She seemed to me avery pretty woman, maybe hto me. Her smile and eyes were maybe the prettier smile and eyest I had ever seen.

"pretty woman" can have a double meaning popculturally, because of the movie pretty woman with Julia Roberts. I don't know how common of a reference that is though.

I always remember the first time I saw her, Sshe seemed to me awas a very pretty woman, maybe her smile and eyes were the prettier smile and eyes I had ever seen.

"She had the prettiest eyes, and smile, I have ever seen", this makes for sense.

Sometimes I think She could be better however She is how she is and she is perfect to me and my children.


Sometimes I think Sshe could be better h. However S, she is how she is, and she is perfect to me and my children.

Sometimes I think Sshe could be better, however Sshe is how she is and she is perfect to me and my children.

She shouldn't begin with the capital letter in the middle of a sentence because it is not a proper noun.

Sometimes, I think Sshe could be better h. However S, she is how she is, and she is perfect to me and myour children.

Pronouns only need to be capitalized at the beginning of a sentence.

Sometimes I think Sshe could be better however S, she is how she is, and she is perfect to me and my children.

She is my best friend and I hope She continues to be like that.


She is my best friend, and I hope Sshe continues to be like that.

She is my best friend and I hope Sshe continues to be like thatis always my best friend.

She is my best friend and I hope Sshe continues to be like that'll always be.

She is my best friend and I hope Sshe continues to be like that.

I wish she always to be with my children and she could give them all the love.


I wish she is always to be with my children, and she could give them all the love.

I wish she will always to be with myour children and she could give them all the love.

I wishhope she'll always to be with myour children and she could give them all ther love.

I wish she always - > original I hope she will always - > corrected I hope she'll always - > more natural Using "wish" isn't wrong necessarily, but hope is clearer and more commonly used in this sort of context. I changed "my children" to "our children" since you and your wife are in the same family, the kids belong to both of you.

I wish she is always to be with my children, and she could give them all the love.

Thanks for reading, and God bless you.


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