Sept. 16, 2021
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Me encanta los postres, no puede ir mal con ellos. Pero, los brownies son mis favoritos. Me encanta la textura de los brownies y estoy obsesionada con el chocolate. Especialmente me encantan los brownies con helado de vainilla. Sin helado, los brownies pueden ser demasiado pesados. El helado de vainilla es ligero y frío, el complemento perfecto al calor y la riqueza de los brownies.
I love desserts, you can't go wrong with desserts. But, brownies are my favourite. I love the texture of brownies, and I'm obsessed with chocolate. I especially love brownies with vanilla ice cream. Without ice cream, brownies can be too heavy. Vanilla ice cream is light and cold, the perfect complement to brownies' warmth and richness.
Mi postre favorito
Me encantan los postres, no me puede ir mal con ellos.
Pero, lLos brownies son mis favoritos.
"Pero" is not needed, as you are not contradicting anything you said before.
Me encanta lasu textura de los brownies y estoy obsesionada con el chocolate.
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Especialmente me encanSobre todo me gustan los brownies con helado de vainilla.
Sin helado, los brownies pueden ser demasiado pesados.
Comma is not needed.
El helado de vainilla es ligero y frío, el complemento perfecto al calor y la riquezaal intenso sabor de los brownies.
I can´t understand very well what you mean by "riqueza" I asume that you mean to say "fullness" or "abundance", or perhaps you are refering to the "richness" of the flavor, in any case I think "intenso sabor" (lit. heavy flavor) might be a better choice, but you might want to change that depending on what you meant.
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Me encanta los postres, no puede ir mal con ellos. Me encantan los postres, no me puede ir mal con ellos. |
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Pero, los brownies son mis favoritos.
"Pero" is not needed, as you are not contradicting anything you said before. |
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Me encanta la textura de los brownies y estoy obsesionada con el chocolate. Me encanta You can use "su" to substitute "brownies" as to not be so repetitive. |
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Especialmente me encantan los brownies con helado de vainilla.
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Sin helado, los brownies pueden ser demasiado pesados. Sin helado Comma is not needed. |
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El helado de vainilla es ligero y frío, el complemento perfecto al calor y la riqueza de los brownies. El helado de vainilla es ligero y frío, el complemento perfecto al calor y I can´t understand very well what you mean by "riqueza" I asume that you mean to say "fullness" or "abundance", or perhaps you are refering to the "richness" of the flavor, in any case I think "intenso sabor" (lit. heavy flavor) might be a better choice, but you might want to change that depending on what you meant. |
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