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My first journal.

Hello there! As the title says, this is my first journal in this page and I must cofess, this is also the first time I write willingly an english text. I hope getting familiar with the interface of this page to start to put some possibly corrections in other's text too! Something I would like to add is that thorugh my childhood I received pasively my curricular lections of English in school, but as a grew I would see the adventages in undertanding the language. I started to translate some Light Novels from English to Spanish (for myself), getting help from a bilingual dictionary and Google. I acquired a lot of vocabulary and then I began to train my ear, but I didn't practice an active skill as writing until now. An apology for all the grammar and ortographical mistakes I surely made. Thank you!

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My fFirst jJournal Entry.

Hello there!

As the title says, this is my first journal in this page and I must cofess, this is also the first time I writeill willingly write an eEnglish text.

I hope to getting familiar with the interface of this pagis page's interface to start to put some possibly corrections in other's text's too!

Something I would like to add is that thoroughout my childhood I received pasively my curricular lections of English in schooldidn't see the value in receiving my English lessons, but as a grew older I would see the adveantages in understanding the language.

I started to translate some Llight Nnovels from English to Spanish (for myself), getting help from a bilingual dictionary and Google.

I acquired a lot of vocabulary and then I began to train my ear, but I didn't practice an active skill aslike writing until now.

An apology for all the grammar and ortographical mistakes I surely made.

Thank you!

My fFirst jJournal.

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

Hello there!

As the title says, this is my first journal ion this pagsite and I must confess, this is also the first time I write willingly awrite in eEnglish text.

or

As the title says, this is my first journal on this site and I must confess, this is also the first time I want to write in English.

I hope getting familiar with the interface ofn this page to start to put some possiblysite will help me start giving corrections into other's text people, too!

Something I would like to add is that thoroughout my childhood, I received passively my curricular lections of English English instruction in school, but as a grew I would see the adveantages in understanding the language.

I started to translate some Llight Nnovels from English to Spanish (for myself), getting help from a bilingual dictionary and Google.

Smart!

I acquired a lot of vocabulary and then I began to train my ear, but I didn't practice an active skill aslike writing until now.

AnI apologyize for all of the grammar and ortographicalspelling mistakes I have surely made.

No worries! We all make mistakes learning a language. That's why we're all here! If we knew the language, we'd probably be somewhere else. I'll probably be here for the next 40 years.

Thank you!

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Welcome to LangCorrect! You wrote very well for someone who hasn't practiced writing. Good work!

My first journal.

Hello there!

As the title says, this is my first journal ion this page and I must confess, this is also the first time I am write willingly an eEnglish text willingly.

word order not right

I hope to getting familiar with the interface of this page to start to putting some possibly corrections infor other user's text toos!

Ackward wording

Something I would like to add is that thorough my childhood I received passively myreceived curricular lectissons ofin English inat school, but as aI grew I wcould see the adveantages inof undertanding the languageEnglish.

Ackwardly worded

I started to translate some Llight Nnovels from English to Spanish (for myself), getting help from a bilingual dictionary and Google.

no need to capitalize here

I acquired a lot of vocabulary and then I began to train my ear, but I didn't practice an active skill such as writing until now.

reads better this way

AnI apologyize for all the grammar and ortographical mistakes I surely have made.

Feedback

Ackwardly worded in parts but easily understood. With practice, you will not have trouble putting the words in a proper sequence. Good work.

My first journal.

This is okay, but titles are generally not sentences and all capitalized letters. So, in that form, you can do: "My First Journal"

Hello there!

As the title says, this is my first journal ion this pagesite/website, and, I must cofess, this is also the first time I write willingly write an eEnglish text.

I hope to getting familiar with the interface of this page to start to put some possibly corrections in other's texts too!

I tried doing a less edited version above, but a better way of phrasing would be here (more concise): "I hope to get familiar with the interface of this page so I can possible begin correcting other's texts too!"

Something I would like to add is that thorugh my childhood, I received passively received my curricular lections of English in school, but as a grew I would see the adveantages inof undertanding the language.

I started to translate some Light Novels from English to Spanish (for myself), getting help from a bilingual dictionary and Google.

I acquired a lot of vocabulary, and then I began to train my ear, but. However, I didn't practice an active skill such as writing until now.

I broke the sentence apart so it doesn't get too long.

AnI apologyize for all theny grammar and ortographicalspelling mistakes I surely made.

This is the first time I saw "ortographical," haha. Spelling is the more commonly used word. Also, you don't have to apologize. Making mistakes is all part of the language learning proccess! Learn to embrace it! :)

Thank you!

Feedback

This was very good for your first journal. While there are mistakes, it was by no means bad.

Mi first journal.


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As the title says, this is my first journal in this page and I must cofess, this is also the first time I write willingly an english text.


As the title says, this is my first journal ion this pagesite/website, and, I must cofess, this is also the first time I write willingly write an eEnglish text.

As the title says, this is my first journal ion this page and I must confess, this is also the first time I am write willingly an eEnglish text willingly.

word order not right

As the title says, this is my first journal ion this pagsite and I must confess, this is also the first time I write willingly awrite in eEnglish text.

or As the title says, this is my first journal on this site and I must confess, this is also the first time I want to write in English.

As the title says, this is my first journal in this page and I must cofess, this is also the first time I writeill willingly write an eEnglish text.

I hope getting familiar with the interface of this page to start to put some possibly corrections in other's text too!


I hope to getting familiar with the interface of this page to start to put some possibly corrections in other's texts too!

I tried doing a less edited version above, but a better way of phrasing would be here (more concise): "I hope to get familiar with the interface of this page so I can possible begin correcting other's texts too!"

I hope to getting familiar with the interface of this page to start to putting some possibly corrections infor other user's text toos!

Ackward wording

I hope getting familiar with the interface ofn this page to start to put some possiblysite will help me start giving corrections into other's text people, too!

I hope to getting familiar with the interface of this pagis page's interface to start to put some possibly corrections in other's text's too!

Something I would like to add is that thorugh my childhood I received pasively my curricular lections of English in school, but as a grew I would see the adventages in undertanding the language.


Something I would like to add is that thorugh my childhood, I received passively received my curricular lections of English in school, but as a grew I would see the adveantages inof undertanding the language.

Something I would like to add is that thorough my childhood I received passively myreceived curricular lectissons ofin English inat school, but as aI grew I wcould see the adveantages inof undertanding the languageEnglish.

Ackwardly worded

Something I would like to add is that thoroughout my childhood, I received passively my curricular lections of English English instruction in school, but as a grew I would see the adveantages in understanding the language.

Something I would like to add is that thoroughout my childhood I received pasively my curricular lections of English in schooldidn't see the value in receiving my English lessons, but as a grew older I would see the adveantages in understanding the language.

I started to translate some Light Novels from English to Spanish (for myself), getting help from a bilingual dictionary and Google.


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I started to translate some Llight Nnovels from English to Spanish (for myself), getting help from a bilingual dictionary and Google.

no need to capitalize here

I started to translate some Llight Nnovels from English to Spanish (for myself), getting help from a bilingual dictionary and Google.

Smart!

I started to translate some Llight Nnovels from English to Spanish (for myself), getting help from a bilingual dictionary and Google.

I acquired a lot of vocabulary and then I began to train my ear, but I didn't practice an active skill as writing until now.


I acquired a lot of vocabulary, and then I began to train my ear, but. However, I didn't practice an active skill such as writing until now.

I broke the sentence apart so it doesn't get too long.

I acquired a lot of vocabulary and then I began to train my ear, but I didn't practice an active skill such as writing until now.

reads better this way

I acquired a lot of vocabulary and then I began to train my ear, but I didn't practice an active skill aslike writing until now.

I acquired a lot of vocabulary and then I began to train my ear, but I didn't practice an active skill aslike writing until now.

An apology for all the grammar and ortographical mistakes I surely made.


AnI apologyize for all theny grammar and ortographicalspelling mistakes I surely made.

This is the first time I saw "ortographical," haha. Spelling is the more commonly used word. Also, you don't have to apologize. Making mistakes is all part of the language learning proccess! Learn to embrace it! :)

AnI apologyize for all the grammar and ortographical mistakes I surely have made.

AnI apologyize for all of the grammar and ortographicalspelling mistakes I have surely made.

No worries! We all make mistakes learning a language. That's why we're all here! If we knew the language, we'd probably be somewhere else. I'll probably be here for the next 40 years.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My first journal.


My first journal.

This is okay, but titles are generally not sentences and all capitalized letters. So, in that form, you can do: "My First Journal"

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My fFirst jJournal.

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

My fFirst jJournal Entry.

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