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hi, my name is "leoncnp" i ´m twuenty one years, i´m from Spain, i´m learning english because in all my life always i´ve heated english, but one day i notice that need learning english if i wanted undertand my favorites songs or speak with everbody, i believed that my english level is B1, i tried studing everyday, anyway that´s all for today bye.
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hHi, my name is "leoncnp."
i ´I'm twuenty.
one years, i´I'm from Spain, i´. I'm learning eEnglish because in all my life always i´I've heated eEnglish all my life, but one day i noticeI realized that I need to learning e English if iI wanted to undertstand my favorite songs or speak with everybody.
and my favorites songs or speak with everbody, iI believed that my eEnglish level is B1, i. I tried studying everyday, a. Anyway, that´'s all for today, bye.
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Every sentence starts with an uppercase letter. You also had a small typo writing the word first.
i ´I'm twuenty
The pronoun I is always written as an uppercase letter anywhere in the sentence.
one years old, i´m from Spain, iI´m learning eEnglish because in all my life always i´ve heated english, but one day iI notice that I need to learning e English if iI wanted undertstand
You can either say I am 21 years old or just I am 21. Hated = not liked, heated is like when you heat water to make coffee.
and my favorites songs or speak with everybody, i. I believed that my eEnglish level is B1, i. I tried studying everyday, anyway that´s all for today bye.
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tThis is my firtst writing in this page.
hHi, my name is "leoncnp".
i ´I’m twuenty (or 20).
one years, i´I’m from Spain, i´and I’m learning english because in all my life I’ve always i´ve hehated eEnglish, but one day i noticeI realized that I need to learning e English if i wanted to undertstand
and my favorites songs or speak with everybody, i. I believed that my eEnglish level is B1, i. I tried studying everyday, a. Anyway, that´’s all for today, bye.!
tThis is my firtst time writing ion this pagesite.
hHi, my name is "leoncnp".
i ´I'm twuenty-one years old,
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one years, i´I'm from Spain, i´I'm learning english because in all my life I've always i´ve hehated eEnglish, but one day iI noticed that I need to learning e English if iI wanted to undertstand
and my favorites songs or speak with everybody, i. I believed that my eEnglish level is B1, i triedand I try to studingy everyday, a. Anyways, that´s all for today, bye.
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Good luck on your English learning journey!
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this is my firts writing in this page
Every sentence starts with an uppercase letter. You also had a small typo writing the word first.
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hi, my name is "leoncnp"
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i ´m twuenty
Connecting with next section
The pronoun I is always written as an uppercase letter anywhere in the sentence.
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one years, i´m from Spain, i´m learning english because in all my life always i´ve heated english, but one day i notice that need learning english if i wanted undert
one years old, i´m from Spain, You can either say I am 21 years old or just I am 21. Hated = not liked, heated is like when you heat water to make coffee.
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and my favorites songs or speak with everbody, i believed that my english level is B1, i tried studing everyday, anyway that´s all for today bye.
and my favorites songs or speak with everybody
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