Nov. 6, 2023
Marathon
Last weekend, I joined a marathon race for the first time and managed to finish it without injury. The reason why I applied for the marathon was that I want to achieve something difficult at the end of my 20s and get a certification like a medal. I got used to work and dull daily life and wanted something to stimulate me. Though I'm not good at playing sports and had only bitter memories of physical education, I love to run or swim until I am exhausted.
It was a big challenge for me because I had only ever run up to 20 km. I should have run more than 30km before the race. But, my training schedule was messed up because of catching a cold. As a result I couldn't run any more at the 30km point and keep walking the remaining 12km. The finish record was about 5 hours, which is far longer than I expected. I am not satisfied with this result and will try again.
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Marathon
Last weekend, I joined a marathon race for the first time and managed to finish it without an injury. Last weekend, I joined a marathon race for the first time and managed to finish it without an injury.
The reason why I applied for the marathon was thatbecause I wanted to achieve something difficult at the end of my 20s and to get a certification like a medal.
I applied for the marathon because I wanted to achieve something difficult at the end of my 20s and to get a certification like a medal.
I got too used to work and dull daily life and wanted something to stimulate me. I got too used to work and dull daily life and wanted something to stimulate me.
mundane is also a good synonym for dull!
TAlthough I'm not good at playing sports and hadve only bitter memories of physical educationit, I love to run or swim until I am exhausted.
Although I'm not good at playing sports and have only bitter memories of it, I love to run or swim until I am exhausted.
you don't need to repeat physical education, because you said sports earlier:)
It was a big challenge for me because I had only ever run up to 20 km.
I should have run more than 30km before the race.
But, my training schedule was messed up because ofI catchingught a cold.
But my training schedule was messed up because I caught a cold.
As a result I couldn't run any more at the 30km point and keepfrom 30km and walkinged the remaining 12km.
As a result I couldn't run any more from 30km and walked the remaining 12km.
The finish recordMy time was about 5 hours, which is far longer than I expected.
My time was about 5 hours, which is far longer than I expected.
I am not satisfied with this result and will try again.
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Good luck for you marathon. The first one is always the hardest!
Nov. 7, 2023
Thank you for correcting me.
Marathon
Last weekend, I joined a marathon race for the first time and managed to finish it without injury.
The reason why I applied for the marathon was that I want to achieve something difficult at the end of my 20s and get a certification like a medal.
I’ve got used to work and a dull daily life and wanted something to stimulate me.
I’ve got used to work and a dull daily life and want something to stimulate me.
Though I'm not good at playing sports and had only bitter memories of physical education, I love to run or swim until I am exhausted.
It was a big challenge for me because I had only ever run up to 20 km.
I should have run more than 30km before the race.
But, my training schedule was messed up because ofI catchingught a cold.
But, my training schedule was messed up because I caught a cold.
As a result I couldn't run any more at the 30km point and keept walking for the remaining 12km.
As a result I couldn't run any more at the 30km point and kept walking for the remaining 12km.
TheMy finish recordal time was about 5 hours, which is far longer than I expected.
My final time was about 5 hours, which is far longer than I expected.
I am not satisfied with this result and will try again.
Nov. 7, 2023
Thank you.
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Last weekend, I joined a marathon race for the first time and managed to finish it without injury. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Last weekend, I joined a marathon race for the first time and managed to finish it without an injury. Last weekend, I joined a marathon race for the first time and managed to finish it without an injury. |
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The reason why I applied for the marathon was that I want to achieve something difficult at the end of my 20s and get a certification like a medal. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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I got used to work and dull daily life and wanted something to stimulate me.
I’ve got used to work and a dull daily life and want I got too used to work and dull daily life and wanted something to stimulate me. I got too used to work and dull daily life and wanted something to stimulate me. mundane is also a good synonym for dull! |
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Though I'm not good at playing sports and had only bitter memories of physical education, I love to run or swim until I am exhausted. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
you don't need to repeat physical education, because you said sports earlier:) |
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It was a big challenge for me because I had only ever run up to 20 km. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I should have run more than 30km before the race. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But, my training schedule was messed up because of catching a cold.
But, my training schedule was messed up because
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As a result I couldn't run any more at the 30km point and keep walking the remaining 12km.
As a result I couldn't run any more at the 30km point and ke
As a result I couldn't run any more |
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The finish record was about 5 hours, which is far longer than I expected.
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I am not satisfied with this result and will try again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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