Sept. 10, 2020
Driving to your office!
Many people like to drive to their workplace by their own car. They might not be so concerned about air pollution. Some people might be worried about air pollution, but they do not have any other options.
In some developed countries, public transport is well developed. However, it is so expensive that many people can not afford it. Therefore, people tend to buy cars to avoid paying when they commute. Personally, I like to travel by busses and subways only when they are affordable, safe, and comfortable.
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Many people like to drive to their workplace bywith their own car.
Many people like to drive to their workplace with their own car.
You can either say "with" their own car, or "by car", where it is implied that the car belongs to them.
They might not be stoo concerned about air pollution.
They might not be too concerned about air pollution.
The meaning is the same, but "too" sounds a bit better.
Some people might be worried about air pollution, but they do not have any other options.
However, it is so expensive that many people can not afford it.
However, it is so expensive that many people cannot afford it.
Personally, I like to travel by busses and subways only when they are affordable, safe, and comfortable.
Personally, I like to travel by bus and subway only when they are affordable, safe, and comfortable.
When we talk about modes of transport, we use singular rather than plural (by "bus" instead of buses, by "subway" instead of subways, by "car" instead of cars).
Sept. 11, 2020
Got it and thank you so much for your help!
Driving to your office!
Many people like to drive to their workplace byin their own car.
Many people like to drive to their workplace in their own car.
Drive in their car
or
Get to their workplace by car
They might not be so concerned about air pollution.
Some people might be worried about air pollution, but they do not have any other options.
In some developed countries, public transport is well developed.
However, it is so expensive that many people can not afford it.
Therefore, people tend to buy cars to avoid paying when they commute.
Personally, I like to travel by busses and subways only when they are affordable, safe, and comfortable.
Personally, I like to travel by bus and subway only when they are affordable, safe, and comfortable.
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Your writing is very clear. Great post
Sept. 11, 2020
Thanks a lot for your correction.
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Driving to your office! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Many people like to drive to their workplace by their own car.
Many people like to drive to their workplace Drive in their car or Get to their workplace by car
Many people like to drive to their workplace You can either say "with" their own car, or "by car", where it is implied that the car belongs to them. |
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They might not be so concerned about air pollution. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
They might not be The meaning is the same, but "too" sounds a bit better. |
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Some people might be worried about air pollution, but they do not have any other options. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In some developed countries, public transport is well developed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, it is so expensive that many people can not afford it. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
However, it is so expensive that many people can |
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Therefore, people tend to buy cars to avoid paying when they commute. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Personally, I like to travel by busses and subways only when they are affordable, safe, and comfortable.
Personally, I like to travel by bus
Personally, I like to travel by bus When we talk about modes of transport, we use singular rather than plural (by "bus" instead of buses, by "subway" instead of subways, by "car" instead of cars). |
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