Enviroment
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Our ancestors enviroment does not is the same as nowadays. The main reason? Actually we both know. The issues are not from yesterday. But how about the solving of these problems? Where are they? Nowhere? Incorrect. We inherited this world from our ancestors. Perhaps the people, me and you do not take care in the same way as it needs. So, we all are the guilty? Not correctly. Because the people who more pollute are those who have more money. Figure with me, rich people have more money to spend. On the another side, those are the people who have more money to be consumist. Being consumist they buy stuff that are not necessary. So, a couple weeks later they throw that away. So you think that these rich people are just a minority piece in the Earth and would be necessary more than that to arrive in pollution that we are today. Even though, when more people buy, more people produce and much more. Producing a bunch of produts create more pollution. Consequently, more green house effect and more rising temperatures. And that is why you are reading this and sweating.
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Our ancestors enviroment does notancestors's environment is not the same as nowadays.
The issues are not from yesterday.
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I'm not quite sure what you mean here.
So, we all are the guilty?
Not correctlycorrect.
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Being consumistconsumerist, they buy stuff that areis not necessary.
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So, a couple weeks later they throw thatit away.
So you think that these rich people are just a minority piece inon the Earth and would be necessary more than that to arrive in pollution that we are today.
I think you are trying to say something like: So you think that these rich people are just a minority on the Earth and can't have resulted in the level of pollution that we have today. Or more naturally: So you think that there aren't enough rich people to have resulted in the level of pollution that we have today.
Producing a bunch of produts createproducts creates more pollution.
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I agree that consumerism causes a lot of problems with the world today! This is a complex topic. There are a couple areas where your words are not very clear, but overall I understood what you wanted to say. Keep writing!
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