Oct. 10, 2020
Mettbrötchen
Raw meat fans?
I like sushi, maybe only vegan won’t eat sushi.
However, in Japan you can eat raw horse meat too.
First time when I know that I was feeling a little scare
After, I have tried couple times, now I like it too.
Now this is a very common and popular German breakfast.
I watched few videos about this German food from YouTube.
But that just like the first time I hear the terms “raw horse meat”.
Shock!
Next time when I have a chance meet some local German people.
I will ask them do they make that kind of breakfast in here.
Do you want to try one?
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
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Good job! Here in the United States, about half the people will eat sushi. Oysters on the half-shell (served raw) are fairly common, as well. Fancy restaurants sometimes serve steak tartare, too.
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