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ponta

Sept. 28, 2020

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Metal Processing

Today, I used a working lathe and made screws for my club activity. Metal processing is enjoyable because I like to see the production process that a metal cylindrical rod changes into a bi little by little. The sharpened surfaces are glitter like a mirror. The only what I do not like about using a lathe is that tiny chips of metal are tingle in the end. I am going to work tomorrow again.

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Metal Processing

Today, I used a working lathe and made screws for my club activity.

This sentence is fine grammatically, but usually I see lathe either by itself: "I used a lathe." or with the type of material it works on: "I used a metalworking lathe."

Metal processing is enjoyable because I like to see the production process that a metalof a cylindrical metal rod changesing into a bi little by little.

I'm not sure what "bi" is supposed to mean in this sentence.

The sharpened surfaces are glitter like a mirror.

The only whatthing I do not like about using a lathe is thate tiny chips of metal arethat tingle inat the end.

I am going to work again tomorrow again.

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ponta

Sept. 30, 2020

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Thank you!

Metal Processing

Today, I used a workingworked on lathe and made screws for my club activity.

Saying "I used to" says that you've done an activity repeatedly in the past that has now come to an end.

Metal processing is enjoyable because I like to see the production process that a metal cylindrical rod changes into a bi(?) little by little.

I kind of did not understand what the "changes into a bi little by little" phrase mean.

The sharpened surfaces are glitter like a mirror.

The only whatthing I do not like about using a lathe is that tiny chips of metal are tingle in the end.

"what I do not like" does not work with "The only ..."

I am going to work tomorrow again.

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bfcool

Sept. 28, 2020

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Today, I used a workingworked on lathe and made screws for my club activity.

Looks like they wrote "used" not "used to" - "I used a lathe" is actually fine.

Metal Processing


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Today, I used a working lathe and made screws for my club activity.


Today, I used a workingworked on lathe and made screws for my club activity.

Saying "I used to" says that you've done an activity repeatedly in the past that has now come to an end.

Today, I used a working lathe and made screws for my club activity.

This sentence is fine grammatically, but usually I see lathe either by itself: "I used a lathe." or with the type of material it works on: "I used a metalworking lathe."

Metal processing is enjoyable because I like to see the production process that a metal cylindrical rod changes into a bi little by little.


Metal processing is enjoyable because I like to see the production process that a metal cylindrical rod changes into a bi(?) little by little.

I kind of did not understand what the "changes into a bi little by little" phrase mean.

Metal processing is enjoyable because I like to see the production process that a metalof a cylindrical metal rod changesing into a bi little by little.

I'm not sure what "bi" is supposed to mean in this sentence.

The sharpened surfaces are glitter like a mirror.


The sharpened surfaces are glitter like a mirror.

The sharpened surfaces are glitter like a mirror.

The only what I do not like about using a lathe is that tiny chips of metal are tingle in the end.


The only whatthing I do not like about using a lathe is that tiny chips of metal are tingle in the end.

"what I do not like" does not work with "The only ..."

The only whatthing I do not like about using a lathe is thate tiny chips of metal arethat tingle inat the end.

I am going to work tomorrow again.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am going to work again tomorrow again.

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