May 18, 2022
It's the first time I've written such a long article. I know there must be lots of mistakes,so please correct me. I would be very grateful if you could give me some advice on writing.
Mercy-killing and Right-to-die
During COVID-19 epidemic, a Japanese doctor revealed that a hospital in the United States had euthanized a patient who was infected severely with no hope of survival and couldn’t afford the medical care, which has sparked heated discussion all over the world.
Decades have witnessed advances in medical knowledge and technological means that has brought unprecedented opportunities for humanity. Medicine has made huge strides in extending human life: advanced life support technology(such as defibrillation and ECMO), kidney dialysis, intravenous/enteral nutrition, organ transplant and so on. Although advanced medical technologies can delay death, many end-stage patients know in their heart that death is still unavoidable. Furthermore, they may spend more resources and suffer more in the process of delaying death. So in the final stages of disease progression, euthanasia is the most desired option for the most of them.
Many people hold the view that euthanasia is a mercy killing, which means that it’s a painless and happy way to die. Patients always make the decision to euthanize after weighing their own quality of life and financial ability and that should be respected, because when a meaningful life is no longer possible, the burden on his family will only be heavier. Moreover, euthanasia allows patients to maintain a natural and intact state of life until the end of life, thus they can pend the last time of life with peace of mind and maintain their own dignity.
It is doctors' duty to save lives and heal the wounded, but it is not the only duty as relieving the suffering of patients is also significant. For a terminally ill and extremely distressed patient, it is more humane to relieve his suffering, rather than take futile methods to increase excruciation. If various measures are taken and there is only more pain on the road to death, they are far from the purpose of medicine. Doctors euthanize patients according to their wishes, which is in line with humanitarian principles. And to some extent, it reflects the pursuit of humanitarianism, which can be seen as a menifestation of the progress of social civilization. In addition, from the perspective of social benefits, stopping ineffective medical treatment is helpful for the rational use of medical and health resources.
Although there are so many reasons supporting euthanasia, some worries cannot be ignored. First of all, euthanasia reflects a negative attitude towards life. People should bravely challenge the disease, instead of ending their lives prematurely, beause great emotional damage will fall on their families and friends if they take off all the heavy burdens through euthanasia. Next, nowadays medical is developing so rapidly that some currently untreatable diseases may be conquered by the medical community within a year or two. Then it would be a great regret for the patients if they choose to die prematurely.
Many murderers working in the medical field satisfy their perverted desires by massacring people at the convenience of their jobs. It would be a great opportunity for them to escape criminal responsibility if both society and the law support euthanasia, because it’s unable to determine whether the patient actually choose to be euthanized by themselves. In addition, it cannot be ignored that some patients request euthanasia because they consider themselves a burden to the family, especially in rural areas where medical insurance has not yet been fully implemented. People feel that death is the best way to solve the problem once they get a serious disease and they are actually killed by poverty, which is a very inhumane social phenomenon. Let’s take Netherlands for example. Since euthanasia was legalized in this country, the number of people who died through euthanasia has risen year by year, and the standard of euthanasia has been constantly being lowered, which suggests that the evolution of euthanasia is spiraling out of control.
There is still a lot of controversy on the issue of euthanasia. But no matter whether we support euthanasia or not, we should put the interests of the patient first, respect the patient's autonomy, and leave the decision to the patient and his family of whether to give up medical supporting.
Mercy- killing and Right-to-die
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I know there must be lots of mistakes, so please correct me.
Mercy-k Killing and Right- to-d Die
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Other than a few word choices and minor grammar issues, I think you write quite well. Pretty heavy topic, but I think you expressed your thoughts quite clearly.
Mercy-killing and Right-to-die Mercy Mercy |
It's the first time I've written such a long article.
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I know there must be lots of mistakes,so please correct me. I know there must be lots of mistakes, so please correct me. |
I would be very grateful if you could give me some advice on writing. |
Mercy-killing and Right-to-die Mercy |
During COVID-19 epidemic, a Japanese doctor revealed that a hospital in the United States had euthanized a patient who was infected severely with no hope of survival and couldn’t afford the medical care, which has sparked heated discussion all over the world. During the COVID-19 epidemic, a Japanese doctor revealed that a hospital in the United States had euthanized a patient who was |
Decades have witnessed advances in medical knowledge and technological means that has brought unprecedented opportunities for humanity. Decades have witnessed advances in medical knowledge and technological means, and that has brought unprecedented opportunities for humanity.
Nice choice of words, you clearly have an advanced vocabulary. |
Medicine has made huge strides in extending human life: advanced life support technology(such as defibrillation and ECMO), kidney dialysis, intravenous/enteral nutrition, organ transplant and so on. Medicine has made huge strides in extending human life: advanced life support technology (such as defibrillation and ECMO), kidney dialysis, intravenous/enteral nutrition, organ transplants, and so on. Medic |
Although advanced medical technologies can delay death, many end-stage patients know in their heart that death is still unavoidable. Although advanced medical technologies can delay death, many |
Furthermore, they may spend more resources and suffer more in the process of delaying death. Furthermore, they may have to spend more resources and suffer more during the process of delaying death. |
So in the final stages of disease progression, euthanasia is the most desired option for the most of them. So in the final stages of a disease's progression, euthanasia is the most desired option for So in the final stages of disease progression, euthanasia is the most desired option for the m I changed "most" to "many", because if you are going to use "most", I'd expect to see evidence/proof of that claim, while for "many", I do not expect that same level of proof. |
Many people hold the view that euthanasia is a mercy killing, which means that it’s a painless and happy way to die. |
Patients always make the decision to euthanize after weighing their own quality of life and financial ability and that should be respected, because when a meaningful life is no longer possible, the burden on his family will only be heavier. Patients always make the decision to euthanize after Patients always make the decision to euthanize after weighing their own quality of life and financial ability and that should be respected, because when a meaningful life is no longer possible, the burden on Changed "his" to "their" to make the pronoun agree with "patients". |
Moreover, euthanasia allows patients to maintain a natural and intact state of life until the end of life, thus they can pend the last time of life with peace of mind and maintain their own dignity. Moreover, euthanasia allows patients to maintain a natural and intact state of life until the end Moreover, euthanasia allows patients to maintain a natural and intact state of life until the end of life, thus they can spend the last time of life with peace of mind and maintain their own dignity. |
It is doctors' duty to save lives and heal the wounded, but it is not the only duty as relieving the suffering of patients is also significant. It is a doctor
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For a terminally ill and extremely distressed patient, it is more humane to relieve his suffering, rather than take futile methods to increase excruciation. For a terminally ill and extremely distressed patient, it is more humane to relieve For a terminally ill and extremely distressed patient, it is more humane to relieve his suffering, rather than take futile methods to |
If various measures are taken and there is only more pain on the road to death, they are far from the purpose of medicine. If various measures |
Doctors euthanize patients according to their wishes, which is in line with humanitarian principles. |
And to some extent, it reflects the pursuit of humanitarianism, which can be seen as a menifestation of the progress of social civilization. And to some extent, it reflects the pursuit of humanitarianism, which can be seen as a m |
In addition, from the perspective of social benefits, stopping ineffective medical treatment is helpful for the rational use of medical and health resources. In addition, from the perspective of social benefits, stopping ineffective medical treatment is helpful for the rational use of medical and health-related resources. |
Although there are so many reasons supporting euthanasia, some worries cannot be ignored. |
First of all, euthanasia reflects a negative attitude towards life. |
People should bravely challenge the disease, instead of ending their lives prematurely, beause great emotional damage will fall on their families and friends if they take off all the heavy burdens through euthanasia. People should bravely challenge their disease |
Next, nowadays medical is developing so rapidly that some currently untreatable diseases may be conquered by the medical community within a year or two. Next, |
Then it would be a great regret for the patients if they choose to die prematurely. Then, it would be a great |
Many murderers working in the medical field satisfy their perverted desires by massacring people at the convenience of their jobs. |
It would be a great opportunity for them to escape criminal responsibility if both society and the law support euthanasia, because it’s unable to determine whether the patient actually choose to be euthanized by themselves. It would be a great opportunity for them to escape criminal responsibility if both society and the law supported euthanasia |
In addition, it cannot be ignored that some patients request euthanasia because they consider themselves a burden to the family, especially in rural areas where medical insurance has not yet been fully implemented. In addition, it cannot be ignored that some patients request euthanasia because they consider themselves a burden to their family, especially in rural areas where medical insurance has not |
People feel that death is the best way to solve the problem once they get a serious disease and they are actually killed by poverty, which is a very inhumane social phenomenon. People feel that death is the best way to solve the problem once they get a serious disease, and they are actually killed by poverty, which is a very inhumane social phenomenon. |
Let’s take Netherlands for example. Let’s take the Netherlands |
Since euthanasia was legalized in this country, the number of people who died through euthanasia has risen year by year, and the standard of euthanasia has been constantly being lowered, which suggests that the evolution of euthanasia is spiraling out of control. Since euthanasia was legalized in this country, the number of people who died through euthanasia has risen year |
There is still a lot of controversy on the issue of euthanasia. |
But no matter whether we support euthanasia or not, we should put the interests of the patient first, respect the patient's autonomy, and leave the decision to the patient and his family of whether to give up medical supporting. But no matter whether |
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