Oct. 3, 2021
Memory During My Business Trip
I can forget this memory when I went on a business trip to Warsaw in Poland.
After finishing my 5days business trip, I got a free time the last day.
I went to the Chopin museum where is one of the favorite place in Warsaw.
I took a tram to go there, and passed through the old town which is the world heritage.
Before I entered the museum, I bought some foods at the convenience store for my dinner.
I ate food in front of the museum while listening Chopin’s songs.
It was a very happy moment.
But it happened when I tried to buy the museum ticket.
In my wallet, there was no credit card.
I remembered that I used it at the convenience store last.
So I tried to go there again and searched my credit card.
Unfortunately, I couldn’t find it finally.
This is one of my bad memories during my trip.
Memory During My Business Trip
I can't forget thise memory of when I went on a business trip to Warsaw in, Poland.
After finishing my 5-days business trip, I got ahad some free time on the last day.
I went to the Chopin museum, whereich is one of themy favorite places in Warsaw.
I took a tram to go there, and passed through the old town, which is the wa World hHeritage Site.
Before I entered the museum, I bought some foods at the convenience store to eat for my dinner.
I ate food in front of the museum while listening to Chopin’s songsmusic.
It was a very happy moment.
But itHowever, something happened when I tried to buy a ticket to the museum ticket.
In my wallet, there was no credit card.
I remembered that I used it at the convenience store last.
So I tried to gowent back there again and searched for my credit card.
If you say "I tried to do X," it usually means that you didn't do X.
Unfortunately, I searched for a long time, but couldn’t find it finally.
This is one of my bad memories during my trip.
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Nice writing! Sorry about your credit card.
Oct. 4, 2021
Thanks for your corrections.
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I can forget this memory when I went to a business trip to Warsaw in Poland. |
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After finishing my 5days business trip, I got a free time the last day. After finishing my 5-day |
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I went to the chopin museum where is one of the favorite place in Warsaw. |
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I took a tram to go there, and passed through the old town which is the world heritage. I took a tram to go there, and passed through the old town, which is |
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Before I entered the museum, I bought some foods at the convenient store for my dinner. |
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I ate food in front of the museum while listening chopin’s songs. |
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It was very happy moment. |
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But it happened when I tried to buy the museum ticket.
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I remembered that I used it at the convenient store last. |
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So I tried to go there again and searched my credit card. So I If you say "I tried to do X," it usually means that you didn't do X. |
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